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4分作文样例
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  Topic: some intensive English Programs in the United States offer a foreign Student the option of living with an American family while he or she is studying abroad. Many students feel that such a home-stay program is a valuable part of their total learning experience. however, others may feel that such a plan offers little value. in a short essay, discuss one or two advantages of living with an American family and then state one or two disadvantages. Tell whether you are in favor of or opposed to the idea of home-stay. give examples to support your opinion.

  Answer

  After a foreign student has decided to come to the United States to study English, he must think about where(where he) is going to live and with whom. I believe that he should live with (with an) American family if he can because they can give him the support(support that) he needs. they can help him improve his English, too.To begin with, the Foreigner who inhabits(lives) with an American family can rely on them for s

  upport as he adjusts to a complete(completely) new way of life. Suppose that(This is especially helpful if) he becomes homesick.

  Another advantage to live with an American family is (is that) the student can improve his English quick(quickly). He will met(meet) friends who came(come) to visit. He will force(be forced) to use English whether he wants or not.

  As far as disadvantages are concerned, I see only one: he may be treated like a baby. The family(family will)want to protect him from danger(dangerous)situation.

  I will concluded by saying that even if the student has to put up(up with) being treated like a child sometimes, he is better off the live(living) with an American family which they (who)can help him. He will find kindness and support when he is new in the country. Also, he will speak English most of the time.




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