英语辅导报小学英语课外学习指导:Myself |
http://www.sina.com.cn 2004/03/26 12:50 英语文摘 |
Look at this photo. A little boy is climbing a tree. Who is the boy? Guess, please! Yes, it's me. My name is Zhu Shaoyu. I'm ten years old. I'm very naughty and smart. I have big eyes and short black hair. I'm thin and tall. I'm a student. I'm in Xia Zhuang Primary School, Qing Zhou City. I'm in Class One, Grade Five. My favourite subject (学科)is English. I study English very hard. I think nothing is difficult, if I put my heart into it. Now I can speak English well. I obtained (获得) the First Award (一等奖) in the 2003 National English Competition for Primary School Students. I will study harder in future. My favourite master of ceremonies(节目主持人) is Li Yong, because he is very funny. My favourite newspaper is English Coaching Paper, because it gives me a lot of knowledge. It makes me learn English better. My favourite food is hamburger, because it is very delicious. I like its taste. Do you like me? Would you like to make friends with me? 博学先生点评台:几乎每个人都很了解自己,所以要是介绍自己,可写的内容很多。但小作者并没有平均分配笔墨,而是重点描写了自己的几个"最喜欢"。整篇文章条理清楚、重点突出、语言流畅、用词准确,可以说写得很成功。希望同学们向朱劭宇同学学习,写出一篇篇精彩的文章与大家共同分享。文章级别:A。 (文/朱劭宇;英语辅导报小学五年级版03~04学年第28期;版权归英语辅导报社所有,独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育,未经许可,不得以任何形式进行转载。) |
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