My grandfather has a small garden. There are many flowers in it. I think all the flowers are beautiful. My grandfather gets up early every mor-ning. First, he goes to his garden to have a look at the flowers. Then, he waters them. When he waters the flowers, he feels very happy. My sister and I like the garden very much. We often play in it. Sometimes we water the flowers and catch worms for them.

　　One day, my brother picked a flower. My grandfather was very angry and sad. He said to my brother, "My child, don't pick the flowers. That's not a good deed(行为). " My brother felt very sorry for that. And we all didn't pick flowers from then on.

　　The flowers in my grandfather's garden are more and more beautiful now. I like my grandfather's garden.

　　博学先生点评台：陶宇同学向大家描写了爷爷的花园，虽没有太多华丽的词语，但能使读者感受到花园的美丽和花儿的芳香。通过描写爷爷对花园的精心料理以及对弟弟的教育，能看出本篇文章不仅仅是写爷爷的花园，也从字里行间中看出了小作者对爷爷的敬佩之情。文章条理清楚、意思连贯，没有语法错误，是一篇很成功的文章，希望陶宇同学再接再励！文章级别：A。

　　(文/陶宇；英语辅导报小学五年级版 03～04学年第38期； 版权归英语辅导报社所有，独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育，未经许可，不得以任何形式进行转载。)