I. 习作要求：

　　假如你是某报社解惑栏目的编辑，请就下封来信的内容写封回信。回信要从老师的角度进行分析，帮助该同学认识此事，并提出合理的建议。

　　Dear Editor,

　　I'm not good at English, so my English teacher is not very kind to me. Once two classmates were talking aloud in class, and the teacher thought I was one of them. He said to me: "Your English is the worst in the class. Don't you feel ashamed making a noise?" I was hurt by his words. I know he looks down on me and I don't know what to say to him.

　　Wang Xia

　　注意：1. 词数： 120左右。2.信的开头和结尾已经给出。3.参考词汇：发脾气 lose one's temper; 沮丧 be frustrated。

　　Dear Wang Xia,

　　Your teacher was wrong to single you out as the worst student in the class.

　　...

　　He might be able to suggest some ways you can improve your performance.

　　Editor

　　II. 学生习作：

　　III. 评语：本文根据来信反映情况及提示要求，开导感到困惑的学生。写作过程要切中要点，中心明确，前后照应，语言流畅。但文章也出现了一些用词或行文逻辑上的错误，其中有些错误是可以避免的。希望在今后的写作中要细心检查，尽量减少不必要的错误。

　　(文/陈光明 黄传东；英语辅导报高中一年级版 03～04学年第41期； 版权归英语辅导报社所有，独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育，未经许可，不得以任何形式进行转载。)