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英语写作精讲精练:一个句子一个句号原则http://www.sina.com.cn
2007年12月27日 10:53 昂立英语
一个句子一个句号原则 理论上讲,一个句子一个句号,但是,实际中会有几个甚至多个句子摆放在一起共享一个句号。此时应该怎么办呢? 答案很简单:标记清楚这些句子间的逻辑关系。有两种: 1.并列关系示例 示例1:I sat down beside her. I said nothing. 变为:I sat down beside her and I said nothing. 示例2:He asked me a question. I answered him. 变为:He asked me a question and I answered him. 2.从属关系 1)运用各类从句,形成主从符合句,包括: 状语从句 宾语从句 定语从句 主语从句 同位语从句 2)运用非谓语动词类进行从属方式的处理,包括: 动词的ing形式 动词的过去分词形式 动词不定式形式 从属关系示例(以状语从句为例) 示例1:When he asked me a question, I answered him. 示例2:I was so angry that I beat him up! 示例3:If you ask me ‘why’, I will answer ‘because’! 示例4:Since you are not feeling well, just lie down and take a good rest. 示例5:Although I have tried my best, I can’t win her heart. 示例6:Wherever I am, I will be thinking of you. 示例7:I went out very early in the morning so that I could avoid the rush hour traffic. 非谓语动词方式处理示例 示例1:I sat beside her. I felt very nervous. 可变为:Sitting beside her, I felt very nervous. 或者:I sat beside her, feeling very nervous. 示例2:I want to quit smoking. I eat candies. 可变为:To quit smoking, I eat candies. 示例3:A young man was tired of sleeping on the floor. He saved up for years to buy a real bed. 可以变为:Tired of sleeping on the floor, a young man saved up for years to buy a real bed. 示例4:Jimmy was dressed up as Father Christmas. He was accompanied by a guard of honor of six pretty girls. He set off down the main street of the city. He rode a baby elephant. The elephant was called Jumbo. 可以变为:Dressed up as Father Christmas and accompanied by a guard of honor of six pretty girls, Jimmy set off down the main street of the city, riding a baby elephant called Jumbo. 定语从句方式处理 定语从句当然是属于“从属”的行列,所以,是处理为从属方式的手段之一。请看下面的例子: This is the only book. I read the book during the holiday. 两句的重合点在the book上面;将第二句中的the book抽出来,放到第一句book后面,其它内容向后甩。这样,我们就会看到the only book后面马上又在重复the book。为了避免重复,我们去掉the book,而换用另外一个词去替换,这个词就是指物的which或that。因为这里的book有only在修饰,所以,最终我们选用that;又因为that在定语从句中作宾语,所以,可以省略。 下面两句的合并遵循同样的原则: She is the girl. The girl’s father is my boss. She is the girl whose father is my boss. 几个句型: …, but…句型(表转折关系) …, for…句型(表原因关系) …, so…句型(表结果关系) …(,/;/.) however,…句型(表更强烈的转折关系) …(,/;/.) therefore,…句型(更强烈的结果关系) …(,/;/.) meanwhile,…句型(表时间关系) …(,/;/.) consequently,…句型(表结果关系) …(,/;/.) admittedly,…句型(表让步关系) 这些基本知识构成了: 1)简单句扩展到复杂句 2)复杂句拆分为简单句 由“分到合”,由“合到分”的“基石”。
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