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考研倒数9天:中国式陷阱--大作文语言错误

http://www.sina.com.cn 2007/01/10 14:22  北京新航道学校

  北京新航道学校 李传伟

  第二十二天:中国式陷阱---大作文语言错误

  语言方面是判卷关注的第二个方面。语言错误较多会扣分,而太多的话就会降低评分档次。有些语言错误是阅卷老师比较关注的,考生必须尽力避免。事实上,考生只要细心,可以少犯乃至不犯这类错误。这些错误包括:

  1.句子的主语和谓语不一致

  2.时态  

  3.名词的单复数

  4.定冠词和不定冠词

  5.搭配  

  6.单词的拼写

  例一,

  错误:More and more people believe smoking do harm to health, waste money. (主谓不一致)

  正确:More and more people believe smoking does harm to health, and is a waste of money.

  例二,

  错误:If the law said that the man who destroy the wildlife’s environment will be fined 10,000 dollars, there will be less people to do that. (时态)

  正确:If the law says that the man who destroys the wildlife’s environment will be fined 10,000 dollars, there will be fewer offenders.

  例三,

  错误:So some of the wildlives become homeless and extinction. (名词的单复数)

  正确:So some of the wildlife become homeless and extinct.

  例四,

  错误:For above-mentioned reasons, I believe the consumption of tobacco will decrease and all problems it causes will be solved. (定冠词)

  正确:For the above-mentioned reasons, I believe the consumption of tobacco will decrease and all the problems it causes will be solved.

  例五,

  错误:Although the light is weak, it plays a great effect which will make people more firmly than before. (搭配)

  正确:Although the light is weak, it has a great effect which will make people more firm than before.

  例六,

  错误:We should take effective methods to deduce the number of fishing boats in the sea. (拼写)

  正确:We should take effective measures to reduce the number of fishing boats in the sea.

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