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考研倒数9天:中国式陷阱--大作文语言错误http://www.sina.com.cn
2007/01/10 14:22 北京新航道学校
北京新航道学校 李传伟 第二十二天:中国式陷阱---大作文语言错误 语言方面是判卷关注的第二个方面。语言错误较多会扣分,而太多的话就会降低评分档次。有些语言错误是阅卷老师比较关注的,考生必须尽力避免。事实上,考生只要细心,可以少犯乃至不犯这类错误。这些错误包括: 1.句子的主语和谓语不一致 2.时态 3.名词的单复数 4.定冠词和不定冠词 5.搭配 6.单词的拼写 例一, 错误:More and more people believe smoking do harm to health, waste money. (主谓不一致) 正确:More and more people believe smoking does harm to health, and is a waste of money. 例二, 错误:If the law said that the man who destroy the wildlife’s environment will be fined 10,000 dollars, there will be less people to do that. (时态) 正确:If the law says that the man who destroys the wildlife’s environment will be fined 10,000 dollars, there will be fewer offenders. 例三, 错误:So some of the wildlives become homeless and extinction. (名词的单复数) 正确:So some of the wildlife become homeless and extinct. 例四, 错误:For above-mentioned reasons, I believe the consumption of tobacco will decrease and all problems it causes will be solved. (定冠词) 正确:For the above-mentioned reasons, I believe the consumption of tobacco will decrease and all the problems it causes will be solved. 例五, 错误:Although the light is weak, it plays a great effect which will make people more firmly than before. (搭配) 正确:Although the light is weak, it has a great effect which will make people more firm than before. 例六, 错误:We should take effective methods to deduce the number of fishing boats in the sea. (拼写) 正确:We should take effective measures to reduce the number of fishing boats in the sea. 更多信息请访问:新浪考研频道 特别说明:由于各方面情况的不断调整与变化,新浪网所提供的所有考试信息仅供参考,敬请考生以权威部门公布的正式信息为准。
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