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全国卷II：满分范文二http://www.sina.com.cn
2008年04月10日 20:42 新浪考试
满分文(二) Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel! Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. The hotel is located 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, a very convenient position to go sightseeing in the Baishan Mountain. There are two kinds of rooms for service: singleperson room, 20 in total and RMB 100 yuan per day and doubleperson room, 15 in total and RMB 150 yuan per day. The hot water bath is provided as well. We serve both Chinses and western food in the restaurant as well as coffee and tea in the cafe. All are provided in a short time. The swimming pool, which is open for the whole day, is free for you to come. We accept booking rooms ahead of time. So come and enjoy! 名师点评： 本文叙述比较详细，使用了比较复杂的句式和短语。首句的伴随状语用得很好。在介绍房间类型时，作者使用了简短的对比句式，很精炼。作者还使用了定语从句which，同时在描述酒店的两种价格的时候也很恰当，语句生动而不重复。 积累卡片 好词1. sightseeing n.观光旅游2. book v.登记；预订 好句1. The hotel is located 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, a very convenient position to go sightseeing in the Baishan Mountain. 宾馆在距离白山入口处500米的地方，这对于参观白山来说是一个很方便的位置。 好处：伴随状语的使用很到位。 2. The swimming pool, which is open for the whole day, is free for you to come. 游泳池全天免费开放。 好处：which引导了非限制性定语从句。 特别说明：由于各方面情况的不断调整与变化，新浪网所提供的所有考试信息仅供参考，敬请考生以权威部门公布的正式信息为准。
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