高考复习指导：英语写作的几个步骤_新浪教育

高考复习指导：英语写作的几个步骤

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　　作者：天津一中梁耀兴

　　以2002年考题为例。

　　内容提示：

　　(1)60%的同学认为不应该收门票；

　　(2)公园是公众休闲的地方；

　　(3)收门票，需建大门、围墙，影响城市形象；

　　(4)40%的同学认为应该收门票，但票价不宜高；

　　(5)门票收入支付园林工人工资、购新花木。

　　说明：

　　(1)内容要点可用不同方式表达；

　　(2)对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。

　　文字提示：

　　Dear Editor，

　　I′m writing to tell you about the discussion we′ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks

　　一、写作：

　　1列出写作要点(或提纲)。

　　2将要点译成英文句(或短语)。

　　3适当增加情节，使全文连贯起来。

　　4将单句合并成文，适当加连接词。

　　(草文)

　　Paragraph One

　　60% of the students are against…

　　They think…

　　be free of charge.

　　Because…and…

　　If the fee is charged…

　　Paragraph Two

　　40% of the students are against…

　　They think…

　　be free of charge.

　　Because…and…

　　If the fee is charged…

　　Paragraph Three

　　…

　　5、进行修辞、润色，特别要注意某些词汇用的频率高，做适当的修改。如：think、if等。

　　(草文1)

　　Dear Editor，

　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.

　　Opinions are divided on the question.60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.They believe a public park should be free of charge.People need a placeswheresthey can rest and enjoy themselves.Charging entrance fees will keep some people away，It will become necessary to build gates and walls，which will do harm to the appearance of the city.

　　40% think fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers，and to buy plants and young trees.They suggest fees should be charged low.

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　6、修饰文章整体结构，加入适当层次连接词。Dear Editor，

　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.

　　Opinions are divided on the question.60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.They believe a public park should be free of charge.People need a placeswheresthey can rest and enjoy themselves.Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.What is more，it will become necessary to build gates and walls，which will do harm to the appearance of the city.

　　On the other hand，40% think fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers，and to buy plants and young trees.They suggest，however，fees should be charged low.

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　二、检查：通读全文，检查复核、修改草稿。特别要注意检查是否漏掉要点；语言表达是否有误；主谓是否一致；时态是否呼应；惯用法是否正确；结构安排是否合理。单词拼写、大小写及标点符号作用是否正确。

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