考研英语前30天成功试卷第四套答案及解析 | |
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http://www.sina.com.cn 2004/12/14 16:18 恩波教育 | |
分析 写作A是一篇投诉信,考生应注意审读规定的情景和相应提纲,挖掘写作内容,做好字 写作B是一篇图表作文,典型的三段论写法: 第一段,描述图表的主要信息,同时指出图表所揭示的现象(彩票热)。第二段分析这种“热”背后的诸项原因。第三段,谈谈考生自己对这个问题的看法。本篇作文值得考生注意的是,要对较多的图表信息进行巧妙的安排。如范文将所给两幅图表分开,一幅用在第一段,正好借以描述当今社会的一种现象,另一幅用在第二段,借以说明这种狂热背后的原因。考生同样有必要对图表描述的常用词句注意积累,见范文。 范文 Part A Sir, May I protest the avalanche(雪崩;大量) of familycomedy programs you have been showing in the evenings during the past two months. I counted twentythree last week alone. Your station has a responsibility to serve all members of the community, and certainly there are not many who can digest this tiring repetition night after night. As the controller of the Ace Company, I am in frequent contact with leading Centerville businessmen. In private conversations, many of them have expressed feelings similar to mine. We look to you for more diverse programming. If it is not forthcoming, some of us will simply turn to other stations. Others will protest to the Federal Communications Committee when your license is due for renewal. Will you please give us fare(食物)that is worthy of our intelligence? Sincerely, Li Ming Part B The past few years have witnessed a growing surge of interest in buying lottery tickets, especially in large cities. It may even be said that people are going crazy about it. As can be seen from the chart, 70 percent of those polled in a large scale survey, held in Guangzhou, Shanghai and Beijing, claimed to have dreamed of winning a fortune of 5 million yuan. Roughly 80 percent of those polled in Guangzhou had had such a dream, while the number in Shanghai and Beijing accounted for 60 percent respectively. The explanation for the phenomenon involves several complicated factors. First of all, more and more people regard personal wealth as a positive thing, which is also encouraged in our government’s policy. People no longer hesitate whenever they are offered the chance to become wealthy. In addition, as the market economy and the living standards of the people improve in China, people find themselves in greater need of money to handle all sorts of expenses. As the survey shows, should they win a big lottery, 81.3% of people would buy a new house, 61.9% would buy a car, and 617% would save the money for their kids’ education. And a great proportion of people say they would put the money in the bank or use it for investment or touring. These considerations all contribute a great deal to the craze about the lottery. In my opinion, the desire for money is not the bad thing it is often supposed to be. Actually, it may serve as a motivation for many people to work hard and thus to contribute to the national progress. And I am confident that, as more and more people become wealthy, life for Chinese people will be happier and more enjoyable. |