Look! What's that? It is our homeland's spaceship. The spaceship is as bright as the stars. It can move. I am proud of our astronaut because I have a wish. I want to be an astronaut.

　　In space, there are many materials. If I were an astronaut, I will be able to know more about space. I think the scene will be very great. On the one hand, I am going to enjoy the scene of the earth. On the other hand, I am going to see some stars.

　　This is my wish. I hope my wish will come true!

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　　刘姝昉同学的文章题材新颖，标新立意，让我们了解到虽然只是一个小小的愿望但却包含了对探索宇宙的好奇及对我们地球家园的热爱，同时也感受到小作者立志成为一名宇航员的伟大理想。最后希望小作者刘姝昉同学能够再接再励，写出更多、更优秀的小文章，同时也祝愿你梦想成真！

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