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雅思考试写作范文一篇:关于博物馆
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Version 120 What are the purposes of the places like museums, and how should they be funded?  

下面我用同样的思路但用复杂一些的表达方式来写一篇高分作文。

------------------discussion-------295words in total---------------

Introduction (44 words)
It is well known that a museum is a building to display a collection of artistic,
historical,cultural or military objects. Undoubtedly museums can have a variety
of purposes in the city; I think two roles the museums play can illustrate they are
worth visiting.

Body1 (89 words)
Visiting museums is informative. (topic sentence) Once I visited a military museum
in Beijing,China, soon I learned that an ancient warrior might have outfought his
enemies in combat if he had had great strength while a modern soldier should be armed
with sophisticated weapons.Therefore present soldiers should spend far much time on
studying modern technology instead of building up muscles. Likewise, If you visit
other museums, you will have a better perception on a certain field, because you
can witness some genuine objects which cannot be seen on books. 

Body2 ( 65words)
In addition, a museum can function to cultivate one's sense of patriotism.(topic sentence)
In china, schools often organize trips to some historical museums. When the students
learn that many years ago, a number of countries invaded China robbing treasure and
killing Chinese civilians, promptly they will establish a strong sense to defend the
nation, revealing that only a strong motherland can give them pride and safety.

Body3 ( 74words)
Now we talk about how to fund a museum. A museum can never be considered as a financial
burden to society. I suggest that the Government should invest a small amount of money
on advertisements for the museums in the city. For example, ads of the museums should
be forwarded on the travel brochures or maps of the city. Consequently tourists come
and admission tickets are collected. Both reputation and funds are earned. Conclusion (23 words) In brief, museums should play a role as an instructive means of the city and incomes
from admission can keep them running properly.


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