Hello! I'm Becky. This is my little cat. I like it very much. Its name is Do Re Mi. It's very beautiful. It's gray. It has triangular(三角形的) ears, round eyes,a black nose and a small mouth. My mother calls it "Little Baby". When I'm at home,it often follows me in and out.

　　My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot. It's very fat,but it's nimble(机敏的). One day,I saw it run fast in the sitting room. I thought it might find a mouse. It was running after the mouse. They looked like playing hide-and-seek. About three minutes later,it brought me the mouse. I was happy. So I touched it with a smile. "You have done a good job,Little Baby." I said. Then it jumped up and down and ran away.

　　Do you like my little cat?Tell me, please.

　　博学先生点评台:

　　罗秀香同学除了向大家介绍了小猫的外貌，还主要描写了小猫在某一天捉老鼠的情景。整篇文章主次分明，语言简炼、生动，没有语法错误。同时，字里行间能使读者感受到小作者对小猫的喜爱之情。希望罗秀香同学再接再厉，在今后的学习中写出更多好文章。

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