I have a happy family. There are six people in my family. They are grandpa, grandma, father, mother, elder sister and I.

　　My name is Yang Yuan. I am a pupil, I'm in Grade 5. I like English very much, I read them every morning. I often listen to the English tape. My grandpa is an accountant(会计). He is very busy. My grandma is a farmer. She does the housework. My mother is a farmer, too. She cooks every day. My father is a worker. In the evening he likes watching TV. While he is watching TV, he often tells us not to talk. My elder sister is a middle school student, she isn't good at English, but she likes maths very much.

　　All of them love me, and I love them, too. I have a happy family. I love my family.

　　点评:杨园同学这篇文章主要描写了家庭成员的职业，并没有充分体现出I Love My Family 这个主题，应着重写一些爱家的原因，My Family更适合做这篇文章的标题，希望小作者在写作时要注意这一点。但整篇文章条理清楚，语言简练，用词准确，没有语法错误，可见小作者的英语语言基本功很好，希望杨园同学在今后的学习中继续发扬这个优点，不要骄傲，写出更多的好文章。文章级别:B。

　　(文/杨园 俞发庆；英语辅导报小学五年级版 03～04学年第36期； 版权归英语辅导报社所有，独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育，未经许可，不得以任何形式进行转载。)