My hometown-Kaiping is a very beautiful city. It is located(座落) in the southwest(西南) part of Guangdong Province(省). My hometown is famous for Diaolous. Ruishi Tower is one of the Diaolous (Please look at the picture.). It was built in 1923. The top of the tower looks like the Italy stronghold(堡垒). It is tall and magnificent (雄伟的). People praise(赞扬) it for "the No. 1 Tower" of Kaiping.

　　I like my hometown.

　　博学先生点评台：林靖蕾小作者的My Hometown主要描写了家乡著名的碉楼，其中重点向大家介绍了"开平第一楼"--瑞石楼，抒发了自己对家乡的热爱之情。整篇文章语句连贯，没有语法错误。文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了，希望小作者继续发扬这个好习惯，并写出更多的好文章与大家分享。文章级别：A。

　　(文/林靖蕾；英语辅导报小学五年级版 03～04学年第44期； 版权归英语辅导报社所有，独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育，未经许可，不得以任何形式进行转载。)