英语辅导报小学版:未来作家 Four Seasons |
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Spring is green. Do you know why? It is because when spring is here, the plants and the trees sprout(发芽) new leaves and turn green. The flowers start to blossom(开花). It is so beautiful and green everywhere. Summer is bright. Can you guess the reason? It is because when summer arrives, the sun is shining. For the very strong sunlight, everything is bright. How beautiful and bright it is! Autumn is golden. Why is this? It's because when autumn comes, the wind blows through the golden trees and carries the golden leaves away, flowing slowly down to the ground one after another and thickly covering the ground. It is golden everywhere. Winter is white. Why? It's because when winter reaches us,the white snowflakes(雪花) fly slowly down, so pure and white. The wide fields and the great high mountains all wear white coats. Oh!The four seasons are all beautiful and charming(迷人的). I like spring, summer, autumn and winter, but spring, the best!For spring is full of life. 福建厦门 曾郁溦 点评中心:小作者曾郁溦以"四季"为题目,开篇直接切入四个季节,以阐述四季的不同为主线,分别进行描述.文章用词准确,语言丰富、生动,语法基本正确.希望曾郁溦同学继续努力,成为未来的作家。 (文/曾郁溦 英语辅导报小学六年级版04~05学年第2期;版权归英语辅导报社所有,独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育,未经许可,不得以任何形式进行转载。) |
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