My favourite sport is swimming.

　　I often swim in the pool. I swim twice a week. When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy. I look like a lovely fish in the pond. I enjoy swimming, because swimming can make me strong and healthy. It can also bring me a lot of happiness. Of course, I like watching this sport. I hope I will become a swimmer in the future.

　　教师点评:这篇小文章语言精炼、准确,短短几句便勾画出了一幅生动、活泼的画面。

　　指导老师:费如春

　　(文/赵云敏　《英语通》小学版2004年第8期;版权归英语辅导报社所有，独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育，未经许可，不得以任何形式进行转载。)