来源：点点英语 作者：丁晓钟 黄强

　　全国四六级考试作文得分平均最高的三个地区是上海、江苏、浙江，其它地区一般都要低于这个水平，这次在浙江杭州批的是江苏、江西、广东、福建的卷子，江苏南京地区主要是负责上海，山东和海南三省市的卷子。南京阅卷中心的作文在1月28号左右已经全面结束，总体看来，四级作文除海南之外大都在8分左右，即第三个档次的文章偏多。具体作文评分原则还是02年制定的那个，大家可以找找点点论坛以前的帖子。

　　江苏南京(代表江苏最高水平)四级作文5-6分的相当多，平均分不到7分，12分以上相当少，考生的主要问题还是各种错误多，语言模板化，缺少亮点。估计有40%以上的考生作文6分以下，也就是说要倒扣分。其它省平均分更低，低大致1-2分。但一个地区平均水平不行，并不一定意味着你作为个体，得分不高。比如说在南京批的海南的卷子，尽管大部分都是一两分，但也有10分以上的。山东的作文也顺便提一下，基本上每次山东的作文大部分人内容都写很多，超过字数要求，这次也是。一般老师看你写这么多，是不好意思给你太低的分数的，这一点请大家体会。

　　六级作文平均分比四级要更低一些，一般有50-60%的人低于6分。

　　四六级作文如果缺少提示中的要点，一般少一点在你的得分档次上扣一分，但一般不超过3分，另外，六级作文如果没写成书信格式，没什么影响。

　　在阅卷过程中，模板作文继续受到阅卷的老师批判，大家一定要注意！

　　阅卷老师主要掌握这些原则，发现闪光点而不是找错误，(参见作文闪光点一帖)有语言错误但是不影响意思表达时可以理解(但必须是在用英语思维的前提下，而不是老师利用汉语的思维回译的内容)，不能只注重语言和单词，要更多注意语句表达出来没有，大家可以好好看看11分档次和8分档次的样卷，可能大家会觉得8分的样卷中有很多大家常用的词组，或者出现高级词汇的频率要多些，但是在阅卷中最主要看的是思想的表达，文字的连贯，把该说的说出来，不拖泥带水才是最主要的。下面是5篇样卷，大家可以参照着给自己的作文估算个分数。

　　14 points

　　Dear fellow students,

　　I am grateful that you offer me the chance to speak here. I am impressed by the speeches of the previous candidates. Yet, I want to prove myself better for the post of chairman.

　　First of all, I have a pleasant personality. Last year I was the dorm director of our building and I managed to get along with all the students well. I have acquired working experience and communication skills which I consider as the most essential for the coordinator of the whole student union.

　　Secondly, I’m always ready to create. At present our union is very well organized. However our activity schedule is slightly motonous. I am willing to add some vivid elements into it in order to make our campus life more enjoyable.

　　If I am elected the chairman, I promise I will become your voice and build the student union into a bridge between the students and the university.

　　I’m your best choice, vote for me, vote for yourself, thank you!

　　干净，整洁，漂漂亮亮

　　11 points

　　Hello, everyone. I believe I am the best choice of the post of chairman of the student union.

　　First, I have the ability which is nessary to the post of chairman of the student union. I have been monitor of our class since I came to this school. In the past years, I worked very well on the post. Second, I have many interests. For example, I play basketball and foot ball very well. My tennis is good, too. Third, I have a lot of friends. Almost everyone likes me.

　　If I were chosen to be the chairman of the student union, I will work for the need of the students. I will tell the school what we students really need and what we don’t want.

　　I believe, I am the best choice for the post of chairman of student union. Thank you!

　　清清楚楚，该说的都说了，语法上没有什么大问题，篇章连贯，但感觉略缺火候。

　　8 points

　　Ladies and Gentlemen, all the schoolmates and teachers:

　　I will elect to the post of chairman of the students union. The reasons I make this decision is that I’m desire to do more things for you. Apparently, only wishes are not available. I’ll make you believe that not only did I have wishes but also capacity.

　　First, when I was a freshman, I took part in many kinds of activities to accumulate experiences and now I familiar with the process that how the students union works. Second, I love making friends and I had extensively hobbies. These can make me orgernize people easily. The tird, I take this work very seriously and I’ll try my best to improve and develop the students union to make you satisfired.

　　In a word, I’m the right person you have ever been searching. So, support me! I’ll never make you disappointed.

　　马马虎虎，想表达某意思，但是有中国式的思维句，有明显汉语的影子。

　　5 points

　　Thanks everybodies to give me a chance to electe the post of chairman of the student union. I’ll do my best in that post.

　　I will inform myself first. I am a man of hard-working. So I will do anything with my best. I can help everyone who needs help. I have a weild-eyesight. Using computer is my farveate thing. Above all, is the reason why I elected the post.

　　If I get the post, I’ll solve the problems of every students. First thing I think must solve is the price in the school. It is too expensive to our student. Second, I think we must have more free time. Nowaday, too many course in our table. So we cannot do something which we want to do. I think it is bad. Last, I wll orginaze more preformances in school, in order to fill the rest time.

　　I hope everyone give me a chance to acheve my hopes. Thanks!

　　糊里糊涂

　　2 points

　　Nowadays in our highly technological society, it’s wildly belived that the person’s ability is very crucial in our daily life.

　　As for as I can do chairman of Student commitment for best. First at all I have good communication skill for any people. Secondly I have goodly boby to competent this assign, because I very like sport and every morning do body excises, mealwhile, I’m a great student to lead us student for study together, and of course. Last but not least. If I election successful, I will do my young age, do anything for every classmate rejoice in hoe and patient in tribulation.

　　All of this reason to lead every people to conclution that I can election.

　　Very hope all classmate support me. Thank you!

　　一塌糊涂

　　据可靠消息来源四六级改革，基本确定在2006年6月下旬的那次考试开始实施，但改多少还是存在变数。