I’m a little girl. I’m thirteen this year. I have two big eyes, short hair and a round face. I study at Yongfeng No.2 Middle School. I’m very good at talking. I’m an interesting hoyden (顽皮女孩).

　　One day during the last winter holiday, my cousin came to my home. I was very happy to talk with her for a long time. And then we quarrelled over a little thing. When Grandma heard it, she came up and told us not to quarrel with each other. “The Spring Festival is coming. You shouldn’t have a quarrel. Or you will not have good luck next year.” she said. My cousin and I quarrelled no more. After a while, my uncle quarrelled with my aunt over something, too. I went over at once and said to them, “It will be time for the Spring Festival. You shouldn’t have a quarrel. Or you will have bad luck next year.” When Dad heard what I said, he laughed and said to me, “My little hoyden, you became a young fetish (物神, 迷信).” I answered immediately, “Well, then Grandma became an old one!” Everyone laughed loudly.

　　This is me, an interesting and lively middle school student named Shen Chao.

　　简评:读了这篇习作后,一个活泼有趣、乐观开朗、俏皮可爱、口齿伶俐的小女孩跃然纸上。文章主体部分所述事情虽小,但却能以小见大,透过此事,我们分明看到了一个活生生的小女孩就在眼前。文章结构严谨,叙述富有条理,语言活泼流畅,是一篇较好的学生习作。

　　(文/沈超 朱贤兵 英语辅导报牛津七年级普及版2004-2005学年第25期；版权归英语辅导报社所有独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育，未经许可，不得以任何形式进行转载。)