批判危害性的框架

　　总共写十七个句子.

　　第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展

和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责.

　　第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害,用 “not only, but also”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性, 第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句子谈一个代替 “for example”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果.

　　第三段六个句子, 第一个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性.第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象,第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一下实践我的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来.

　　第一段

　　(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably,

　　(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of 主题 should be condemned severely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测危害的趋势

　　(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主题 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than主题 to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主题 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.

　　最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法

　　(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主题. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.

　　积极有利型的文章

　　第一段谈的是三个句子,第一,二个句子都是在描述图画,第三句子这个现象对社会发展的积极的现象,第四个句子是图画简单,寓意深刻.

　　第二个段子,第一个句子谈一个十二个单词的爆发力的主题句,第二个句子谈这个现象的永恒的社会含义,用一个三十五个单词的

　　第三个段子首句 谈二十五个单词的超豪华的句子,谈无论做大事还是小事,无论做难事还是容易事,都要这个积极现象.第二个句子谈有两点建议让它变的更好.第三个句子谈让它变的更好的第一个方法,通常发挥它的好处,避免坏处.第四个句子谈第二个方法,第五个句子谈个谚语,第六个谈解决任务的任重道远.第七个倒装句谈只要有这个积极现象就会享受一个美好,丰富和有活力的未来.

　　文章以团队精神为例子

　　(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).(2) The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

　　(1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

　　老师，看图作文中，假如看不懂出图人的内涵，怎么办？

　　会的：题目一旦跑题，文章写得再牛，整个分数就很低，首先你要记着，不要只关心图片，一定要在图片之外给的信息中，有没有给出一些明确的信息点，有些题目，给出一段话或一行话，这一行话就点了一下题目。咱们举一个例子，去年的考题，养老的文章，很多人写成是几个孩子争先想要抢他的父亲赡养，正好读反了。为什么？他在读图的时候没有仔细，你仔细看之后，其中有一个镜头是明显是出去的一根线，而不是进来的线。因此当然该猜测是踢出去而不是抢进来。所以你需要的是把图中所有和直接主干的图信息，相关的点先看完，再把图之外的信息看完，根据这一点获得。如果你不行，你这么着来。当作自己是什么都不知道的人，你闭着眼睛呆半分钟，你再看这个图，你乍一看，像是什么，就是往哪个方向，因为这个图有一个原则，就是不能有模棱两可型。如果你真读不出来，你除非写记叙。你把图论述完之后，这是一个什么社会现象。然后就躲开了对这个题目的论述，这样的社会现象，我们该对这个现象持一个什么样的态度，这个时候可以躲开原图是褒还是贬。

　　这时候养老方面的问题点，对于这样的一个社会现象，咱应该从哪些方面如何做？你这么着是可以的，但是一般这样做不是很好，因为这样有和原题脱节的嫌疑，如果你真是不行，只能采取这种方法。

　　重点预测的文章:

　　一.对别人真诚，无私奉献　　

　　Genuineness and devotion are rewarding

　　(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, a young man with a suitcase under his arm is stretches his hand to greet himself reflected in the mirror. (2)The most striking feature is his image in the mirror is smiling at him sincerely. (3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, devotion is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is devotion that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not devote sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than devotion to earn others’respects. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as devotion to make our life more colorful and energetic. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who always care about his way of thinking will be living a selfish and lonely life. Only by being genuine to others can they win other people’s trust and can they reward the support, sympathy .

　　(1)From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to cooperate with others with great zeal It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine everyone to be our friends not enemies.(3) On the other hand, it is demanding for us to examine our behaviors to make sure they will not hurt others.(4) However, it is easier said than done. (5)Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

　　二. 谦让,退一步海阔天空.

　　(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).(2) The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that modesty is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is modesty that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we are not kind with others sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than modesty to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as modesty to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is selfish will make a mess just because no one can help the selfless. (8)Only by being kind to others can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

　　(1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to be modest to others. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to be kind to others. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

　　三. 不断的打败,挑战自我

　　(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).(2) The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that challenging ourselves is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is challenging ourselves that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not challenge ourselves sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than challenging ourselves to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is lazy will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

　　(1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to challenge ourselves. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

　　四. 和谐的生活态度,不要光注重眼前的利益,要长远的规划,the harmonious attitude

　　(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).(2) The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that the harmonious attitude is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is the harmonious attitude that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we emphasize on one side too much, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than the harmonious attitude to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as the harmonious attitude to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is so shor-sighted will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by being harmonious with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

　　(1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to form the harmonious attitude. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your the harmonious attitude better. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to balance the conflicting sides.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

　　消极的现象:

　　预测范文一 Good neighbors 图画描述了两个邻居个领着一只狗,狗在互相打招呼,而人却很冷漠

　　As is vividly depicted in the picture, the two lonely neighbors seem to ignore each other while the two dogs greet each others politely and amiably.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, the social interactions have been diminishing. Recently the phenomenon that lots of people love to raise the dogs while neglecting the communications between the neighbors or relatives has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of ignoring the human communications should be condemned severely or made illegal. Pet-keeping is becoming an increasingly pervasive because a pet may be a companion for old people, a friend for young couples and a playing toy for children. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测 危害的趋势

　　To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several reasons have been put forward. To begin with, they are so busily scheduled that they have no time even for a drink with some friends. In addition, While there are so many dishonesties going around, they must stay with a dog, which is likely to be faithful to them. Since a pet is loyal to his master and acts as the instructions of humans, a person has no need to get along with his neighbors who may have different opinions about his or her ideas, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have once dropped wastes into the places of interests do take it seriously. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our neighbors.

　　最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法；

　　From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the pets damaging the the relations between the neighbors. On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the social contacts between neighbors. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of communications between people instead of staying with a dog alone. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later

　　预测范文二 图画描述了很多游人在游玩和照相，在天安门广场游玩时，在吐口香糖，乱扔废弃物，广场上充满了污渍

　　As is vividly depicted in the picture, thousands of tourists strolled on the Tiananmen Square, busily taking photos and enjoyed themselves freely.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, those people threw away the chewed gum and the smoked cigarette . Recently the phenomenon that the tourists destroyed the environment seriously has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of destroying the environment should be condemned severely or made illegal. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测 危害的趋势

　　To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several effects have been put forward. To begin with, destroying the environment not only results in the loss of sanitary maintenance but also does harm to the indignity of our national images internationally since Tiananmen Square as the most high-profile site represents the face-lift of China . In addition, some unhealthy or even poisonous wastes will cause the people to breathe the harmful air ,which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have once dropped wastes into the places of interests do take it seriously. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our heritage.

　　最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法；

　　From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the tourist damaging the environment. On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect the cultural relics. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving the relcs out of the evil hands of destruction. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.

　　预测范文三 一个人总在忙碌,工作压力很大,要承受很多社会的压力,包括买房子和车子

　　As is vividly depicted in the picture, there are so many things that the man has to bear or to seek.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, it is like him that alost everyone of us feels tired or even exhausted . Recently the phenomenon that lots of people have to suffer great pains from the stress from all aspects of family and society has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of being seriously pressured should be condemned severely. Everyday we jump out of bed with the ear-splitting ring of the alarm-clock, swallow the quick breakfast and then rush to catch the bus. When arriving at the workplace, we have to work every minute to its full value. Besides, a lot of people have to sacrifice a high pay to earn money to feed their family and buy houses which are too expensive to afford.

　　There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测 危害的趋势

　　To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several reasons have been put forward. To begin with, the first stess-maker is competition.

　　Nowadays may people, who have a strong career-mind are involved in a fierce competion for money, ranks,and fame. In the rat race, they try every means to stay on the top and keep on working until they can hardly breathe.In addition, the reason why they are suffering a great pain is that they have such a great ambition to succeed and want to accomplish their goals in the shortest possible time. Just because of their ambitionw, they put great great pressures on themselves and have no time for relaxation to enjoy themselves.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have once tasted the stress are becoming physically or mentally ill. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our heritage left by our ancesters.

　　最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法；

　　From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the stress damaging the the health of most people. On the one hand, we should be sensible to develop a positive attitude towards competition. That is, competition is not the ultimate goal of life, but a driving force that motivates us to fulfill our dreams On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of developing a schedule which includes enough time for rest and other important values. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later

　　其他的预测

　　大作文之一 压力　　短文指导　　A.Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in no less than 200 words.　　B.Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2.　　C.Your essay should meet the requirements below:　　1)describe the set of pictures, interpret its meaning　　2)and point out the implications in our life　　参考范文：　　The set of pictures present in front of us a sharp contrast between two different kinds of attitudes people hold in the face of stressful events. The former type is always staying away from some misfortunes or crises, trying to desperately “fly” when confronted with difficulties, but individuals of the latter type optimistically “fight” against such events, sure that they will be in control of their own destiny. Indeed, we should act on the values of optimism.　　The pessimist invariably takes a passive “fight” in the face of adversities. He feels like fate’s plaything and moves slowly. He doesn’t seek advice, assuming that nothing can be done when he is in difficulty or in distress. Any studies suggest that the pessimist’s feeling of helplessness undermines the body’s natural defenses, the immune system. Feeling passive and unable to dodge life’s blows, he expects ill health and other misfortunes, no matter what he does.　　On the contrary, optimists will feel in control of their own life. If something is going wrong, an optimist acts quickly, reaching out for advice, forming a new plan of action, and looking for solutions. He will think that he is much better than the facts would justify-and more often than not, that is what keeps him alive and active, as evidenced in many successful medical treatments. He actually recognizes that stress is nothing but a natural part of his routine life. Sure enough, what determines our choice between “flying” or “fighting” will be our attitudes towards life, not the stress itself.　　If we hold an optimistic attitude, we can change our life for the better. Very few can come through distressful periods with more physical and mental vigor than they had before. We should also know that a long time with no “fighting” except “flying” can lead to boredom, and even worse, to physical and mental strain. (about 300 words)

　　大作文之二

　　幸福是什么

　　Directions:

　　Look at the following picture and write an article on advertisement. Your article should cover the points below:

　　Study the following picture carefully and write an essay to

　　(1) describe the picture

　　(2) interpret its meaning, and

　　(3) give your suggestion as to the best way to find happiness.

　　参考范文：

　　As is vividly depicted in the cartoon, a boy is contemplating the true meaning of true meaning of happiness. It is indeed a tough question for him: what on earth is happiness? He is puzzled as to in which circumstance he will feel happy—when he makes money, or wins true love, or is in good health, or what?

　　It is obvious that happiness is difficult to define. We all know people who have a relatively easy and comfortable life, and yet are essentially unhappy. And we may also have friends who have suffered a great deal but generally remain happy. Therefore, happiness is actually of one’s own making. If you have a positive attitude and are determined to find the little happiness of life, you are destined to be jolly, no matter what kind of situation you are in.

　　Happiness is an attitude, not a condition. It lies in the struggle to be happy. People sometimes go to extremes and frantically pursue money, power, high social status, etc., which are all symbols of success—but never of happiness. Perhaps if they shifted their goal from ultimate success to unswerving efforts and to confidence that they will be successful one day, they’d be a great deal happier.

　　三. 贫富和谐

　　Type A

　　1) Show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the pictures below(描述点题段).

　　2) Give a specific example, and. (举例说明段)

　　3) Give your suggestion as to the best way to overcome it (前瞻感言段)

　　As we can see from the picture, a weary-looking woman, with her little sleeping son clung to her back, is cleaning and polishing shoes for a well-dressed lady. The dressy lady is also with his son, a boy, high-flying, fashionably-dressed, apparently from a well-to-do family. The picture is heart-rending-- a dramatic view of the widening gap between rich and poor in our nation.

　　Although a lot of efforts have been put into bridging the gap, the situation is far from optimistic. Take the uneven development of our nation for example. On one side of the picture, some people in the developed areas of country are enjoying almost everything that modern civilization can offer---- luxury cars, expensive houses and other devices for comfortable life. The other side of the picture is that in some underdeveloped areas, a lot of people are still living in sheer poverty. They do not have the minimal means of living, even no money for the education of the young. Looking at all these, how can we stay aloof and easy?

　　Our nation is building up a harmonious society. If we don’t do something to harmonize the situation by achieving common welfare for all the people, how can we accomplish that noble goal? As a famous man put it, “If we can not help the many who are poor, then we can not save the few who are rich.” Effective measures need to be taken to help the poor so that we can work towards a harmonious nation where the rich is just and the poor secure.

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