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重庆卷：满分范文一http://www.sina.com.cn
2008年04月10日 20:58 新浪考试
【满分范文】 满分文(一) Dear Amy, Im Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! Im sure you will win. It is reported that the America anticancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon. Yours, Li Hua 名师点评： 本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如Im sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。 积累卡片 好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠 好句1. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain. 我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。 好处：which引导限制性定语从句。 2. So, stand up and fight against the disease! 因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧！ 好处：掷地有声，语言准确。
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