2015年全国研究生入学考试今天拉开帷幕。今天是考研[微博]的第1天，下午进行了英语的考试，新东方在线[微博]考研辅导名师团队第一时间通过酷学网对考研真题进行直播解析，敬请持续关注。

　　以下是新东方在线考研名师朱伟为2015考生带来的考研一英语作文范文解析：

　　上海新东方国内部总监、考研英语培训专家朱伟老师和汪中平老师合编的《2015考研英语作文考前预测20篇》再次直接命中考[微博]研英语一写作真题。

　　请对比小黄书167页原文原图：

　　《科技的发展给生活带来巨大改变》

　　关键词：太空游，网上购物利弊，科研学术造假，科技奴隶(kitchen rage， be addicted to the smart mobile phone)

　　可以看出，不同的仅是图画。实际完全相同。那么，对原文开头稍作调整就是一篇高分作文。

　　When the hot word of the year——“innovation” arouses wide concern from the public, can we still stand there, hesitating for what occurs? As we can see from the depiction, four youngsters, seemingly having a dinner, are in fact concentrated on their smart phones. Actually, it is a morning call to send us a message that the topic concerning “high-tech burden” has been in the spotlight that attracts attention from every corner of the world。

　　But my own worry today is less that of the overwhelming problem of electronic trashes than it is of the slightly more luxurious agony of the decline in communication even of well-educated youths. We scarcely write a handwritten letter other than an E-mail, which displays fewer touching emotions than the script, for example. Several factors could weigh heavily for this degeneration, yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects. To begin with, as the economic boom brings not only the high standard of modernization but the fast rhythm of living as well, many citizens could hardly keep cool when facing the relentless competition. Disastrously, many choose to abandon themselves to so-called high-tech pleasure so that they can escape from reality for a while. Furthermore, externally, our society is witnessing an overwhelming number of innovative goods, ranging from Iphone5s to all-powerful TV remotes, which exaggerate this kind of nonsense to produce the over-worship toward “High-tech”. A recent survey reveals that one in three college students in China thinks he is willing to spend RMB5880 buying an Iphone rather than study materials。

　　Fortunately, that is not the Day of Judgment. It is, undoubtedly, the very time that we should take some available methods to end these inappropriate behaviors, including laying down the effective regulations to modulate the orientation of scientific advancement, shaping a moderate science outlook and guaranteeing more rational lifestyles to the high-tech。