高考英语作文提分宝典之范文篇(2)

2014年06月06日17:03  沪江英语 微博    收藏本文     

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  注意:1. 词数100左右;

  2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

  3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

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  【参考范文】

  Dear Peter,

  How are you doing?

  I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before。

  Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!

  His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket。

  Looking forward to your reply。

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  【2013•广东卷】Ⅲ写作 (共两节,满分40分)

  第一节 基础写作(共1小题;满分15分)

  你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报写一篇时事快讯。

  [写作内容] 写一篇关于移民[微博]火星的快讯

  [写作要求] 只能用5个句子表达全部内容

  第二节 读写任务(共1小题;满分25分)

  阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文

  To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant ,not necessarily because they are lazy. The same man, who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office, may work hard at the weekend ,painting the house or digging the garden。

  What is the reason, then? In most cases, it is because these people simply do not enjoy the Job they are doing .It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy, like making up wooden boxes, but it is very boring. Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much larger one, such as attaching a door handle to a car. But the part they play in actually making the car is so small that they can never say: I have made something !

  Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such as cleaning streets because this is the way society is organized, No matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. Society cannot function a single day without the “dull and boring” jobs。

  [写作内容]

  1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

  2. 以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法,内容包括:

  (1) 描述清洁工工作的艰辛;

  (2) 假如没有清洁工,环境会变得如何?

  (3) 你对平凡工作者的看法。

  [写作要求]

  1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

  2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

  【参考范文】

  第一节:基础写作:

  It is reported that thirty volunteers to be sent to the Mars who are at least 18 years old will be chosen from all the globe by the year of 2015. The volunteers must make a full preparation that there is almost no chance to return to the earth once they are immigrated to the Mars. What’s more, it is greatly important for them to try to keep a good relationship with other members. Experts strongly warned that the living conditions on the Mars are very hard, for not only the extremely cold climate would they meet with, but also loneliness and fear. On the contrary , the volunteers insist that they have got tired of the life on the earth, so greatly being eager to experience the unknown, mysterious life on the Mars; meanwhile, if the would be succeeded , they would get the honor to be heroes of human beings。

  第二节:读写任务

  In the passage, the author mainly stressed the importance of small and ordinary work, such as cleaning the street because of their essentiality for the organization of the society ,and thinks those doing such jobs should be respected greatly。

  There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is more harder compared with any other jobs in the society. On one hand, they must get up in the early morning every day to clean the street while we are sill in the sweet sleeping dreams. On the other hand, they also suffer from less respect and lower pay, working all day on the street no matter it is sun shines strongly or snow, wind heavily。

  Nobody could imagine what an bad environment we would live in if there were no cleaners in the city. Wherever we go, there is rubbish. Maybe we would soon be drowned in the mountain of rubbish. Even worse, if there were no change about that, diseases would spread at a very quick speed. Is there anything that can be worse than this!

  From the above, I can draw the conclusion safely that even the smallest and the most ordinary job, such as cleaning the street is also the necessary part to keep the society going smoothly. Consequently, those who do those most insignificant jobs should get respected as much as those being engineers or doctors。

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