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雅思小作文写作技巧与应注意事项
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  雅思技巧与注意事项(写作---小作文)个人总结分析(谢谢各位51IELTS的帮助)

  1。试卷发下后,请花半分钟的时间来浏览作文的题目,这里包括议论文在内。

  2。此后,请看第一部分的题目,明确以下几点

  1)属于什么题型的图表,是一个曲线图,一个饼图,一表格,一个流程图还是一个物体以及其他类型的图表

  2)是一幅图还是两幅或者是以上的图

  3)时间、字数以及其他的要求

  3。用5分钟的时间分析并形成以下的内容

  1)注意不同类型图表的技巧(包括时态、语态、关键描述词语与句型)

  2)划出并分析题目中的关键内容,分析图表中的关键特征点(依据各种图表的特点来决定)

  3)考虑结构(开头引言,描述特征,可能总结)注意以下

  开头不能与文章已经给出的东西一样,用自己语言表达;

  描述关键以及有代表性的点或者是趋势;

  在语法与句法正确的基础上,力求用不同的句型组合(如简单句,复合句,定语/表语/宾语/非谓语从句),用近意词语;

  正确表达文章所给信息;

  在可能的情况下做简单的总结;

  不要发表有个人或者是评论性的句子;

  标点符号,单词的拼写应该正确;

  4。书写的时候注意流利与工整,采用现代式的书写格式

  5。留有时间检查,保持卷面的整洁

  技巧性套句(仅供参考)

  开头句型(用简单的句子给出尽可能多的信息WHEN,WHAT,WHERE,有特色。)

  一般有两种,一种是主动一种是被动。

  1)The chart/graph/table/diagram/process (show,reveal,illustrate,demonstrate,depict,describe,indicate)

  2)According to/As can be seen from/As shown in/It is clear/apparent from/It can be seen from

  结尾句型(如果没有可以充分说的,可以不用结尾。结尾不要节外生枝。最好不要出现很明显有结尾特征的词语“in conclusion”)

  中间关键句型————☆要注意认真审查题目,弄清楚要描述的数据究竟代表什么,单位是什么,用什么方式表达。

  OBJECT (描述物体)

  注意点:要明确以一定的顺序来写。从左到右或者是从上到下,从内到外(根据物体自己的特点)等等。把题目中给出的部件详细描述。(如202的自行车)

  句型:介绍功能The illustration is of a _______ which is designed to (do something)

  ↓

  说明构成部分A ______ is made up of /consists of/comprises How many ?A number of parts/sections

  ↓

  描述各个部件功能不要用you ,one可以用we, the operator (单数个体) First , (the cyclist) puts his or her _____on the ____

  要有一定的顺序,不要将每个部分单独写出,应该将能够合并的一起结合,注意用以下句型(被动态,定语从句,非谓语动词)

  要用关联词

  PIE CHART (饼图)

  注意点:1)文字中要表达出总量与分量的关系,在两个以上的PIE中,要注意各个PIE间的比较

  2)数据究竟代表什么应清楚

  语言点:1)percentage / proportion

  2) (v.) make up/ constitute / account for

  3)①

  the biggest difference between 2 group(A+B) is in…,where A makes up 5% while B constitutes 67%

  the highest percentage of A, which was approximately 12%

  ②

  the percentage of A in…..is more than twice that of B,the ratio is 67% to 45%($% compared to $%)

  ③in…,while a greater percentage of A than B are found in……. (the former is $% and the latter is $%)

  ④

  there are more A in……,reaching $%,compared with $% of B

  ⑤

  A , which used to be the……..,has become less important, which declined(increased) sharply from $% in 1978 to only $% in 1998.

  ⑥

  The biggest loss was to某区域.

  The biggest gains in A were made by某区域.

  FLOW CHART (曲线图)

  注意点:1)抓住“变化”和“趋势”

  2)有两种情况其一是在不同时间段内的数据比较,另外是单独数据的全程描述。前者适合于数据代表的物体较少且时间界限明确的情况下,后者适合于描述数据对象很多且时间划定不清晰。当然依据考试中的题目来决定。

  语言点:1)变化状态幅度词(要依据描述的情况决定)

  轻微-----slightly, slowly(速度), steadily(平缓)逐渐----gradually

  显著-----significantly , markedly急剧-----rapidly , dramatically , abruptly ,sharply突然---suddenly趋势---trend inclination tendacy

  2)变量幅度词语

  ★增加-----increase, jump ,go up ,rise, climb , ascend , level up ,surge,

  ★减少----decrease, drop ,go down ,fall,---- , descend, level down ,

  ★水平----keep/stay/remain/maintain stable ,----steady ,be similar to ,there is little/hardly any/no change

  ★最高-----reach a highest point/the top/the summit/the peak/the most/peak in,at

  ★最低-----reach a lowest point/the bottom//rock/hit a trough /bottom out

  ★交叉-----correspond with in ----year; --- crossing the line for -----

  3)时间幅度词语

  During the period 1970—1999 ; From 1970 to 1999 ; Since the early 1970s ;

  In 1970------then in 1980-----ten years later

  4)基本句型

  There was变化趋势in the number of A from 1986-1990(over next…..yeas) ,which was followed by变化趋势and then变化趋势until 1998 when there was变化趋势for the next….years

  From 1990 onwards, there was变化趋势in the number of A which then变化趋势at $% in 1994.

  In 1990,the number reached (was) $%,but 30 years later there was变化趋势.

  After变化趋势from…to…,A begin变化趋势over the next….years.

  The number of…increased rapidly from 1988 to 1990 during the five-year period

  〓

  There was a rapid increase from 1988 to 1990 during the five-year period

  A has almost/nearly/about/over a quarter/half/twice/one third /as many students as/as much money as /B; A has about/approximately/exactly/precisely the same number/proportion/amount of students/money as…..

  It has reached something of a plateau,X percent/an average of X percent in the past few years in 1998.

  in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...

  the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of.....

  the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of.

  ....decreased year by year while...increased steadily....

  here is an upward trend in the number of

  ..(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in.....

  a has something in common with b/ the difference between a and b lies in..

  柱状图(Bar chart)

  注意点:1)柱图主要是陈列的数据比较多,不能将所有的信息写出,只能抓住重点与关键点来写(这些点可以是最大、小值;最高、低值;差距最大最小点等等)都需要结合题目来分析,对于一些点的特征具有相似性应该采用统一合并的方法,不能每有项都列出。

  2)应该根据一定的顺序来写,否则会因逻辑不合理而失分

  语言点:1)一般是以比较极与最高级的句子形式出现如

  Low income consumed more hamburghers than other group(=more than other /group/ on hamburghers),spending more than twice/ as much as hamburghers than FC and Pizza(both about 40%)

  High income favoured pizza,spenting $%,followed by FC at $%,then hamburgher at $%.

  High income appear to less than other /group/ on hamburghers,pizza remain their most popular fast-food, followed by FC.

  In 1975,among 3 of the world’s largest cities, San Paulo had the highest population(about 0.5 billion),and……is the second highest(about….. )……had the lowest population (about….).

  As a result in 1990,the number of….appears the largest population, closely followed by…,then…….at……

  The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in 3 countries between 1930-1960 in great Britain, the numbers in prison has increased from….in 1930 to….in 1940,apart from in 1950 when the numbers in prison fell by….

  On the other hand , New Zealand and Australia are the only two countries in which the numbers in prison remain steady from 1930-1960,although there have been slightly fluctuations in this trend.

  In the period 1975to 1990,all cities showed a growth, Tokyo and Newyork had by far the largest increase (about…..).san Paulo had the smallest growth(about…)

  There were no figures given for male part-time workers.

  In unemployed group, men enjoyed more leisure time---over 80%,compared with 40% for women(同一群体的比较), markedly more than women in retired group(不同群体的比较).

  表格/统计图(Table chart)

  注意点:1)同柱状一样对数据间的变化与特殊显著数据的描写要求很高

  2)选择好顺序

  流程图(Flow Chart)

  注意点:1)与物体、地图的描述一样,保持相同的作题原则

  2)一定要按照顺序来说明

  3)明确图片上要求说明的内容是什么,不要随意编造


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