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四级冲刺班内部笔记写作热点话题及逻辑结构http://www.sina.com.cn
2007年12月10日 17:38 新东方
II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构 Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点(general); (2) 具体描述这个事物或者观点(或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法specific)。 Paragraph 2: (1) 作者对该现象货问题的基本看法,即文章的论点句; (2) 支持性的细节分论点(至少两点); (3) 本段总结(可以省略)。 Paragraph 3: (1) 总结全文,定下结论(通常为我的对策或看法)。 四级作文试题2000年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多多种途径解决。 2. 哪种途径适合我(说明理由)。 How I Finance My College Education How I Finance My College Education 第一段:首先,应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点: Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern. 第二段:有多种的方法,例如:1.向父母; 2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱 第二段主题句:There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various. 第二段分写: In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents. In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates. What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money. 第三段:我所赞同的方法(阐述原因,为何不选其他的方法)。 Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons. For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me. For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs. In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back. Therefore /So /Hence,..... 使文章富有表现力的手段: 1、使用有难度的词汇; 2、使用形容词修饰名词,用副词修饰动词或整个句子; 3、使用被动语态; 4、使用倒装句;(not only... but also...;only...) 5、尽可能地使用名词,而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。 绿化我们的城市 第一段: 近年来,随着工商业的迅猛发展,许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人们作出各种努力防止树木被砍伐,但是,认识到绿化城市也同样重要。 特别说明:由于各方面情况的不断调整与变化,新浪网所提供的所有考试信息仅供参考,敬请考生以权威部门公布的正式信息为准。
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