四级冲刺班内部笔记写作热点话题及逻辑结构

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  II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构

  Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点(general);

  (2) 具体描述这个事物或者观点(或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法specific)。

  Paragraph 2: (1) 作者对该现象货问题的基本看法,即文章的论点句;

  (2) 支持性的细节分论点(至少两点);

  (3) 本段总结(可以省略)。

  Paragraph 3: (1) 总结全文,定下结论(通常为我的对策或看法)。

  四级作文试题2000年1月

  Directions:

  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

  1. 上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多多种途径解决。

  2. 哪种途径适合我(说明理由)。

  How I Finance My College Education

  How I Finance My College Education

  第一段:首先,应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点:

  Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.

  第二段:有多种的方法,例如:1.向父母; 2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱

  第二段主题句:There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.

  第二段分写:

  In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.

  In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.

  What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.

  第三段:我所赞同的方法(阐述原因,为何不选其他的方法)。

  Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.

  For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.

  For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs.

  In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back.

  Therefore /So /Hence,.....

  使文章富有表现力的手段:

  1、使用有难度的词汇;

  2、使用形容词修饰名词,用副词修饰动词或整个句子;

  3、使用被动语态;

  4、使用倒装句;(not only... but also...;only...)

  5、尽可能地使用名词,而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。

  绿化我们的城市

  第一段:

  近年来,随着工商业的迅猛发展,许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人们作出各种努力防止树木被砍伐,但是,认识到绿化城市也同样重要。

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