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千万别这么写 雅思写作十大“见官死”开头http://www.sina.com.cn
2007年12月09日 13:39 无忧雅思网
“见官死”开头之一:废话连篇不知所云(喷血指数:☆☆☆) 典型失败案例: Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married? This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married…… 修改方案:开门见山 直奔主题 In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married. Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题) Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life. Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important! “见官死”开头之二:中式英文 人见人晕(喷血指数:☆☆☆☆☆) 典型失败案例:Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily…… Topic 2- The population problem The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there. Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world? I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things…… Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”. 特别说明:由于各方面情况的不断调整与变化,新浪网所提供的所有考试信息仅供参考,敬请考生以权威部门公布的正式信息为准。
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