Hello,dear friends! Welcome to my village. It's big and beautiful! I like it very much.

　　Look!There are many houses in the village. They are small. There are many high and beautiful mountains near the houses. There is a big forest behind the houses. There are many big trees in it. There are many rivers in front of the houses. The water is clean. There are many fish in the rivers. There are many bridges over the rivers. There are many big trees on the river banks. And there is grass and flowers on it. The grass is green. The flowers are colourful and beautiful. There is a lake in the village. There are many ducks in the lake.

　　The sky is blue. The rivers flow. The air is fresh and clean. My village is very beautiful!I like it very much!

　　光临本期"点评中心"的是宁晓燕同学的I Like My Village。本篇文章采用生动、细致的描写方法，勾勒出一幅美丽、和谐的乡村图画。文章在用词方面比较准确，多处采用There be句型。但有些地方可用连词连接，无需再重复使用There be句型。希望宁晓燕同学能够再接再励，写出更多优秀的文章。

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