This winter holiday, I went to Kunming with my family. Kunming is a very beautiful city, I think. The sky is blue and the air is clean. You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere. The weather there is great. It's never too hot or too cold all the year round, so people always call it "Spring City".

　　Kunming is surrounded(围绕) by beautiful scenery. And one of the most famous views is "The Stone Forest". It is really scenic(自然风景的).

　　We just stayed in Kunming for six days, but I felt very happy, and I like Kunming very much.

　　点评：寒假虽然已经过去一个多月了，但是在这个假期所发生的事大家是否还都铭记在心呢？李丽同学就把她的这份心情用笔记录了下来。小作者通过在寒假期间去美丽的春城--昆明游玩，抒发了对美好自然风光的热爱。文章生动、形象，用词准确，希望李丽同学能写出更多这么好的文章供全国的同学们欣赏！

　　(文/李丽 王宁；英语辅导报小学六年级版 03～04学年第39期； 版权归英语辅导报社所有，独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育，未经许可，不得以任何形式进行转载。)