英语辅导报小学六年级版:未来作家 My Uncle |
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My uncle is a professor. His name is Chen Hao. He teaches Chinese in a university. He is tall and thin. He wears a pair of glasses. He likes reading. He has a big study at home. It's very bright. There are many books in his study. He often reads and writes in his study. He is kind to his students, so his students like him very much. He is very kind to me, too. He often sends me books. I like him, too. 点评中心:本篇小文章描写的是小作者的叔叔,首先从她叔叔的职业、外貌开始描写,接着又描写了她叔叔的爱好--读书与写作。表达了小作者对其叔叔的崇拜与敬仰之情。文章条理清晰,用词准确,无语法错误,是一篇较优秀的文章。 (文/陈冬莹 费美丽;英语辅导报小学六年级版 03~04学年第44期; 版权归英语辅导报社所有,独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育,未经许可,不得以任何形式进行转载。) |
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