I live in a small village named Fengyi. I live in an old building. It was built in 1999. It has three floors. On the first floor, there is a big living room, a kitchen and a bathroom. On the second floor, there are altogether three bedrooms. One for my grandma, one for my parents, another for me. On the third floor, there is an attic. It's my study, it's quiet. I like to study there. When I am tired, I can rest in the balcony. There is some beautiful old furniture, it's tidy. My parents clean it every day. I can also do some housework.

　　My friends, do you love my home?

　　点评中心：徐佳荟同学的My Lovely Home开篇直接切入本文主题，首先从房子的结构开始介绍，句子简洁、通顺，接着又重点描述了与自己有关的几个房间，语言生动、贴切，最后又抒发了自己对家的热爱。希望徐佳荟同学今后能写出更多优秀的作品！

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