The weather is getting hotter and hotter. The summer holiday is coming. What a happy day! Birds are singing in the trees. Butterflies are dancing in the garden. Children are playing in the park.

　　Some boys are playing on the slide(滑梯). Some boys are listening to music. Other boys are reading under the big tree. Some girls are drawing pictures. Other girls are playing on the swings(秋千).

　　I like roller-skating(滑旱冰) in the square. And my classmates are playing football. We are very happy!

　　博学先生点评台：邵强同学的这篇文章描写了同学们和自己在假期里快乐的一天，表达了他们对假期的喜爱以及在假期里自由自在、放松自我的心情。读后有种很想加入他们当中，与他们分享快乐的愿望。整篇文章用词准确，语言生动，中心明确、突出，是一篇很成功的文章。文章级别：A。

　　(文/邵强 郝清华；英语辅导报小学五年级版 03～04学年第43期； 版权归英语辅导报社所有，独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育，未经许可，不得以任何形式进行转载。)