初中英语课外辅导:短文和对话的互改 |
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进行短文和对话间的互改是我们练习写作的一种方式,今天就让幼幼鼠和黑黑熊教你这一招! 黑黑熊:将一篇短文改写成一篇对话,或将一篇对话改为一篇短文的形式,有利于提高英语表达的能力,你练习过吗? 幼幼鼠:你瞧,我这儿正好有一篇练习,请您过目: 根据下面对话写一篇短文: Paul: Who's that girl? Bill: She's a new student in my class. Paul: What's her name? Bill: Her name is Anna. Paul: How old is she? Bill: She's thirteen. Paul: Is she Chinese? Bill: No, she's American. Her father is a policeman. And her mother is a doctor. 改写后:Who's Anna? Bill says, she is a new student in my class. How old is she? She is thirteen. Is she Chinese? No, she isn't. She is American. Her father is a policeman. Her mother is a doctor. 黑黑熊:我感觉你只是将对话的内容组合到一起了。 幼幼鼠:是有这样的感觉哦。 黑黑熊:你应注意去理解所给对话的内容。这篇练习主要内容是Bill在向Paul介绍关于Anna的情况,我们应抓住这一内容来写。例如: Bill knows Anna. They are in the same class. But Anna is a new student in his class. Paul doesn't know Anna. Bill tells him about her. She is thirteen. She is American. Her father is a policeman. Her mother is a doctor. 幼幼鼠:真是惭愧,我还没有注意人称、语言、表达方式等方面的相应变化。不过我发现我们需要特别注意答句。 黑黑熊:不错。但有时问句中也包含有一定的有用信息,需要在短文中体现出来。 幼幼鼠:若要将短文改为对话,实际上不就是前者的一个相反的过程吗? 黑黑熊:当然。在设计对话时应注意从短文内容上寻求设问的突破口,并考虑到英语与汉语在某些表达方式上的不同。在第7面有此类的相关练习,去试一试吧! (文/诸立忠;英语辅导报新目标七年级版04—05学年度第8期;版权归英语辅导报社所有,独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育,未经许可,不得以任何形式进行转载。) |