初中英语课外辅导:Traveling in Ganzhou |
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During the National Holiday (国庆长假), I went sightseeing with my parents in Ganzhou—a big and beautiful city in the south of Jiangxi Province. We had a good time there. There are over twenty places of interest and scenic beauty (名胜古迹) in Ganzhou. Most of them are very famous and interesting. I think Tongtian Rock(通天岩) is the best of all. It is covered with colorful forest and rocks. It has the most beautiful scenery(景色)and the friendliest service. But the snacks there are the worst, it's too hot. Ganzhou Zoo is on Beijing Street. The ticket for it is the cheapest. There are many animals in the zoo, such as tigers, elephants, pandas, lions, giraffes and so on. Of all the animals in the zoo, the pandas are the most interesting and cutest and the elephants are the biggest. South Island is an island in the middle of Ganjiang River. It has the biggest swimming pool and the most comfortable dining-rooms (餐厅). But I think it has really bad service. Some restaurants pour (倒) waste water into Ganjiang River. It's too bad. I really enjoyed my traveling in Ganzhou! 教师点评:小作者十一长假随同父母游玩赣州之后对几个主要景点加以比较和评述, 较好地运用了课文中所学过的主要词汇和句型。同时小作者具有强烈的环保意识, 对南岛一些餐馆直接向赣江排污表示了关注,对一位八年级的同学来说,这是非常难能可贵的。因此无论是从行文还是从内涵来说,本文都可谓是一篇难得的佳作。 (文/陈悦;英语辅导报新目标八年级普及版04—05学年度第24期;版权归英语辅导报社所有,独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育,未经许可,不得以任何形式进行转载。) |