人类社会的永恒话题, 对比论述突出好处,比如坚持不懈, 打败自我,团队精神,为人真诚,实事求是从正面列举该积极事物的好处,克服困难, 征服挑战, 完善自我,走向成功,创造辉煌从反面列举没有这个积极事物时的不好, 郁闷迷茫, 无成就感和前进动力, 失败挫折感最后要谈两点建议措施和联想美好未来.

　　话题：坚持不懈---------------在失败的时候坚持, 做好每一件小事为成功做好准备

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　　首段：四句话，描述图画，表明图画发人深思。

　　As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述图画. The most striking feature is 图画重点信息.

　　描述图画两句，第一句宏观表明图画的视觉效果。 第二句表明的图画的最大特色是什么。

　　There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　此句子表明图画所微妙传达的象征含义，发人深思，十四个单词增加亮点，弥补首段字数不足，为下文点名观点作好铺垫

　　Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon that which plays an active part in our society.

　　二段：七句话，揭示象征含义，从正反两方面论述该积极事物的重要性。从正面列举该积极事物的好处,克服困难, 征服挑战, 完善自我,走向成功,创造辉煌从反面列举没有这个积极事物时的不好, 郁闷迷茫, 无成就感和前进动力, 失败挫折感，而且要举例证明使观点具体化，并以倒装并列句结尾，画龙点睛。

　　As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重复上面的图画信息

　　profoundly indicates that perseverance is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.任何积极话题必然与成功有联系，成功是衡量该话题是否积极的唯一标准。该段首句设置爆发力句型，增加气势，让老师给出很高的第一印象分，借此开头很有特色。

　　Perseverance means that people can persist on when they face the difficulty and prepare every detail for the coming success.定义法论述：毅力—在困境中坚持，做好细节，准备成功；

　　It is perseverance that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success.强调并列句是英语的极品句型，大气磅礴。此万能句子是任何积极事物都可以帮助我们克服困难,征服挑战,走向成功.

　　Unless we stick to our dream,(适当把主题词进行同义替换)we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated.

　　双重否定句子从反面论证宏观说明危害性，如果缺乏该积极事物就生活郁闷挫折被竞争所淘汰。

　　To account for the above mentioned topic, several reasons can be put forward as mentioned below.

　　To begin with

　　In addition

　　Last but not the least

　　No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.

　　(举例证明把for example 写成十四个很有特色，而且表明下面的例子很重要，又增加一分，老师看了这么多for example，审美疲劳，老师一看该句，一定激动。

　　Many capable people who have the burning desire to win fail to achieve their goals just because they don’t persist (是坚持的同意改写)especially when they face the music.

　　Many people who。。。。。。just because。。。。。。想成功但失败因为他们不能坚持特别是遇到困难的时候，

　　Only by being perseverant can they guarantee a success and have a strong will to always challenge themselves.指的是永远成功

　　倒装并列句在段落末尾写，增加气势，第二段结尾很重要，不要晚节不保。倒装句在结尾补充再好不过。此句很万能，表明只有该积极事物让我们永远成功；

　　三：5—6句话，承上启下总结上文，两点建议，展望美好未来

　　From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to persevere than to despair.

　　From 。。。。。。。。。。承上启下, 引起下文, 多达二十五个单词的总结句 表明无论做大事小事，难事容易事，都需要积极事物支持我们。

　　It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to cultivate confidence and to pursue the coming goals.

　　建议措施的总起句子, 引起下文，被动句子很有风采.

　　On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine about the colorful future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to punish ourselves in certain ways if we fail to hold on to our dream.

　　结构很清晰,sensible 表明建议很理性, 从反方面再谈很辨证.

　　However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

　　这个闪光的万能句多达25个单词，强调实践的重要性.而且还有谚语,表明建议用于实践。

　　话题二：打败自我，不断改正自身缺陷吸收别人长处，完善自我，自信面对人生；

　　1Defeating ourselves or Defeating others

　　Defeating ourselves------------fight with our defects-------------------perfect ourselves------confident--------perseverant----------------have a better understanding of ourselves

　　As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述图画. The most striking feature is 图画重点信息. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重复上面的图画信息 profoundly indicates that defeating oneself rather than the other competitors is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. You have to fight with your own shortcoming and perfect yourself as much as possible. It is defeating ourselves that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we defeat ourselves, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many people who do not have faith in themselves always lose the match. Only by defeating ourselves can they make full use of their advantages and have a strong will to always challenge themselves.

　　From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to have a better understanding of oneself. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make yourself more competitive in the society. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to enrich our minds. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be more perseverant. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

　　3. Team work 一个人盖楼房很辛苦, 很多人在一起建, 他们脸上有很多笑容.

　　As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述图画. The most striking feature is 图画重点信息. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重复上面的图画信息 profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we cooperate sincerely, , we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

　　From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be active in taking a more tough job and always helpful and honest to other people. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

　　4. 对别人真诚，有礼貌，无私奉献，谦虚为人

　　Genuineness and cordiality are rewarding

　　As is vividly depicted in the picture, a young man with a suitcase under his arm is stretches his hand to greet himself reflected in the mirror. The most striking feature is his image in the mirror is smiling at him sincerely. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that his smile can be reflected as tenderly as his real smile profoundly indicates that genuineness and cordiality are momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. It is corporation with the team with great zeal that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we are genuine to others, we will not be acknowledged, appreciated and respected by the others No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who always care about his way of thinking will be living a dull, depressing life.Only by being genuine to others can they win other people’s trust and can they reward the support, sympathy .

　　From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to cooperate with others with great zeal It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine everyone to be our friends not enemies. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to examine our behaviors to make sure they will not hurt others. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

　　5.选择工作，实事求是，量体裁衣，因地制宜

　　The fittest is the best

　　As is vividly depicted in the picture in the left picture a man A carrying a spanner. He seems very delighted and energetic although wet over with sweat. The most striking feature is……………..There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

　　As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that the two man in different social positions have different attitudes toward life profoundly indicates that the fittest is the best to anyone who wants to enjoy their life. It is fitting the job that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we choose the job that fit us, we will make a mess out of our life. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who have the burning desire to win choose a admirable employment and suffer great illnesses.

　　From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to choose job that can be done within his capability. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to find what we are skillful at and make a plan about the future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to change to another job if it does not fit us.However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.