恩波考研英语前30天成功试卷第三套答案及解析 | |
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http://www.sina.com.cn 2004/12/14 15:04 恩波教育 | |
分析 写作A是一篇致歉信,考生应注意审读规定的情景和相应提纲,挖掘写作内容,做好字 写作B是一篇情景作文,考生要审读所给情景,确定文章的主题,然后列出提纲。仔细阅读本题标题和情景后,考生应发现有两种展开方式:1. 第一段对比性的描述围绕“欲速则不达”,人们在实践中的不同表现;第二段阐述自己在这个问题上的看法。2. 第一段描述人们在看法上总的来说是一致的;第二段说明人们在实践中的做法则有所不同;第三段考生可阐明自己对这个问题的看法(见范文)。二段或三段不是问题,关键在于考生能否把命题的全部内容讲清楚。 范文 Part A Dear Mrs. Harrison, I was most upset to learn that Thomas had kicked his ball through your sitting room window again this afternoon. He has been warned repeatedly not to play on that piece of waste ground beside your house, especially since the last accident. Unfortunately, he disobeyed me, and I can only offer my sincerest apologies. When you have the window repaired, please send the bill to me. I intend to keep the money out of Thomas’s pocket money in the hope that this will teach him a lesson. Apologize once again. Sincerely, Li Ming Part B People generally agree with the saying “More haste, less speed”. Indeed, most people are acting on this principle in their daily activities. They realize that if they do things in a hurried way, they will achieve less than what they hope for. However, if things are done at a reasonable pace, people can, more often than not, attain their goals as expected. Nevertheless, when it comes to daily practice, not everyone observes this principle. For example, in the 1950’s, the leaders of Chinese government wished to realize Communism in a shorter period of time by so called “Great Leap Forward”. Yet, the result is that the whole economy was totally damaged and the people’s life became miserable. Likewise, students may make the same mistakes in their studies. Some students intend to gain enough credits as soon as possible by selecting many courses in a term, only to find that they fail in most of the courses. To make things worse, their required courses suffer a lot. Obviously, more haste invariably means more failures. In short, I strongly believe that “more haste, less speed” should be a warning to our decisionmaking. Only when we keep it in mind can we avoid the same mistakes mentioned above and ensure our final success in all respects. |