I have a pen and a pencil.The pen is very nice,but the pencil is so dirty.

　　One day,the pen met the pencil. The pen said to the pencil:"What a dirty pencil!"The pencil said :"Yes.I'm dirty .But I can write words.""I can write words，too .Now,let's see who can write more words."

　　They began to write.They wrote and wrote.The pen wrote lots of words on the paper.The pencil wrote lots of words on the paper,too.After a long time,the pen hadn't any ink(钢笔水)left(剩下).The pencil became short,but he could still write .

　　At last,the pencil won.The pencil said:"Haha...haha...Who won,you or me ?"The pen drooped(低下)his head.Then he said to the pencil:"I shouldn't laught at(嘲笑)you.You are good,too."

　　博学先生点评台：这是一篇很成功的文章。文章不仅立意新颖，更重要的是寓意深刻。同时，也能看出小作者有着丰富的想象力。希望顾洁莹同学在今后的学习中充分发挥自己的想象，写出更多、更好的文章。文章级别：A。

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