Jim and Kim are my best friends.Jim is short,thin and quiet.But Kim is tall and strong,but not fat.After class,Jim is different from Kim and I.Kim and I like to play soccer.We often kick the ball on the playground.But Jim doesn't play with us.He likes to read books in the library.Sometimes he likes to listen to music.In the evening,Jim often helps Kim and me with our English.We talk a lot and laugh a lot.We are best friends.

　　博学先生点评台：赫冲同学向大家介绍了自己的两个好朋友。语言流畅，用词准确，没有语法错误，字里行间能体会到小作者与两位好朋友之间的深厚友情。另外，从整篇文章中也可以看出小作者的英语基础知识掌握得很牢。希望赫冲同学在今后的学习中写出更多，更好的文章。文章级别：A。

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