My hometown is Chongqing. Chongqing is a foggy(有雾的) city. When it is foggy, we can hardly see anything. I like fog because we can play hide-and-seek on the foggy day; I like fog because my hometown is just like a fairyland(仙岛) then.

　　Chongqing is a mountain city. You can see a lot of hills and mountains in Chongqing. We often climb mountains in spring and autumn. We always have a good time.

　　Chongqing is an ancient city. It has a long history. The story in the famous novel "Hongyan" took place in Chongqing. The Changjiang River goes through it. Standing on the top of the beautiful Emei Mountain, you can see the magnificent landscape(风景) of my hometown.

　　I love my hometown. I am proud of it.

　　点评中心：小作者以流畅的文笔向我们展现了一幅美丽的家乡风景画,特别是对"雾"的描写, 字里行间洋溢着对家乡的热爱。文章层次清晰,语言通顺、流畅,是一篇非常优秀的作文。

　　(文/岳萱 尹玉芳；英语辅导报小学六年级版 03～04学年第43期； 版权归英语辅导报社所有，独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育，未经许可，不得以任何形式进行转载。)