Today is a shining day, the sky is blue, the wind is strong. My grandfather and I are going to the park to fly kites.

　　My grandfather takes me to the People's Park. We fly my "Rocket". "The wind is too strong, the kite can't fly!" I say. My grandfather looks and says, "Let me try!" "Sure!" So my grandfather catches the string and I hold the kite. "Follow me, one, two, three, run!" I run with my grandfather quickly. Oh! It's so wonderful! The kite is flying up with the wind. I am so happy and ask my grandfather, "Why can't I fly it up, but you can?" My grandfather says with a smile on his face, "Because you fly the kite against the wind." "Oh, I see." I nod my head happily.

　　We play in the park until late. We enjoy ourselves.

　　点评中心：小作者用平实的语言描述了风筝从飞不上天到飞上天的过程，特别生动、形象，同时又结合小作者与爷爷的对话，让人看完以后有种身临其境的感觉，仿佛放风筝的活动历历在目。

　　(文/包峰俊 潘聪；英语辅导报小学六年级版 03～04学年第45期； 版权归英语辅导报社所有，独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育，未经许可，不得以任何形式进行转载。)