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  Three Key Components of the Winning Cover Letter

  1.A brief background

  Your academic status, whether you have graduated or the expected date of graduation.

  Your academic institution, major, and special area of studies.

  Relevant industry experience, if any.

  2. Intention

  Responding to an job advertisement.

  Unsolicited letter to express career interest.

  The specific area of your career interest.

  Full time career or summer intern.

  3. Closing and suggestion of future action

  Highlight your differentiating factors.

  Specify that you will be attending the upcoming company sponsored event; you will call; or seek an appointment.

  Key Points to Note

  A one-page cover letter will suffice.

  State your intentions without ambiguity.

  Highlight some of the most relevant experiences related to the job you are seeking.

  Be unique, professional and interesting.

  Ensure that the cover letter is free of any grammatical and typing errors.

  Addressing it to a specific person is better than “To whom it may concern” .

  Martin Chen

  188 Xiang Yang Road South N102

  Shanghai 200031, China

  Stephen O’Brien

  Vice President

  ABC Banking Inc.

  1330 Avenue of America, 29 Floor

  New York, NY 10080

  August 19, 2002

  Dear Mr. O’Brien,

  I was greatly impressed with the wealth of insightful information presented by you and your colleagues during the recent career presentation at our campus. Your candor and willingness to share has enthused many of us.

  I am determined to pursue a career in private client services with a global financial institution that has the product, service platform, investment research, and all other resources necessary for a leadership position in the highly competitive marketplace.

  In the exploration of career options, I have spent considerable amount of time to learn more about the private client services business. Specifically, I have spoken to a number of professionals already working in the industry to gather information on: 1) what it takes to be successful in this business; 2) sacrifices and commitment; 3) major trends and development. Based on this information, I have done a self-assessment on my own strengths and weaknesses to see if I have the aptitude, attributes and tenacity to be good at it. I have come to the conclusion that I can make a difference in this challenging industry. The preparation and the basic knowledge that I have acquired will allow me to take advantage of the training program and resources at ABC Investment banking Inc. I have the confidence that my value propositions in servicing the high net-worth clients in China will be differentiated.

  I was not successful in bidding for the interview schedule by ABC Investment Banking Inc., I would very much like to request for an opportunity to meet you or your colleagues on campus. Kindly advise me if alternative arrangements can be made.

  Sincerely yours,

  Martin Chen

自述信

  自述信就是一篇简要的自我介绍,根据已经提供的信息,阐明自己的目的。

  自述信的三个重要组成部分

  1. 简要的背景介绍

  你的学业情况:是否已经毕业或预计的毕业日期;

  你所在的学术机构、专业和研究的具体领域;

  相关的行业经验,如果有的话。

  2. 目的

  对招聘广告的回应;

  对该行业感兴趣的主动表示;

  所感兴趣的具体领域;

  全职或暑期兼职。

  3. 结束语和对自己今后一些行动的提示

  强调自己与众不同的地方;

  你将参加该公司赞助的活动;你将致电对方或与对方预约面谈。

  需要注意的重点

  自述信的长度只需一页;

  明确表明你的目的;

  突出与你应征的职位关系最密切的工作经验;

  确保行文与众不同,具有专业水准并且生动有趣;

  不要犯任何语法或者拼写错误;

  写出收信人的姓名比写“敬启者”(To whom it may concern)效果更好。

  自述信实例

  陈马丁

  上海市襄阳南路188号N102室

  中华人民共和国,200031

  Stephen O'Brien 先生

  副总裁

  ABC投资银行

  America大道1330号29楼

  纽约,NY 10080

  2002年8月19日

  亲爱的O'Brien先生:

  您和贵公司的同事在我校的校园展示会上所提供的富有见地的翔实资料给我留下了深刻的印象,同时,您坦白直率的性格以及愿意与大家分享信息的行为更使我们深受鼓舞。

  我决心在国际金融机构的证券销售部门工作,因为国际金融机构拥有丰富的产品、广阔的服务平台、详尽的投资调查,以及在竞争激烈的市场上保持领先地位的其他必要资源。

  在进行职业选择的过程中,我投入相当的时间研究私人客户服务业务。我还特意与相当数量的业内人士进行了交谈,搜集了以下的资料:1)在这个行业成功的要素;2)从事这一行业所要作出的牺牲和需要承担的义务;3)行业发展的主要趋势和方向。在这些资料的基础上,我对自己的优势和劣势进行了自我评价以判断我是否具备从事这一职业的能力、品质以及走向成功所需的坚韧性。结论是:我完全可以在这个充满挑战的领域凸显自己。我所作的充分准备和扎实的基本功可以顺利地完成ABC投资银行的培训项目,并能有效地利用银行所提供的资源。我为中国高端客户服务的价值定位将是与众不同的,对此我充满自信。

  很遗憾我未被列入ABC投资银行的校园面试时间表中,诚挚地希望能够有机会与您或您的同事进行面谈。若能获得约见,烦请通知我。

  您忠诚的,

  陈马丁




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