Spring

　　I like spring because spring is beautiful. Many flowers are very lovely. Some grass and trees turn green.

　　Look! A little girl is flying a kite with her father. She likes to fly kites. Her father is smiling. It's very warm today. So there're a lot of birds flying in the sky. They're playing together. They look very happy. A breeze is blowing over the land. The sunlight is soft. A clear river is flowing.

　　How beautiful the spring is!

　　湖北武汉 田 劲

　　博学先生点评台: 田劲同学的这篇文章篇幅虽短却写出了春天的生机与活力.特别是小作者着重描写了春天里的某一天,使整篇文章的中心更加明确.用词准确、生动,没有语法错误也是这篇文章的另一优点.文章级别:A.

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