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Help! There are three animals living near a river. They are a chick, her mother and a duck. Today is Mother's Day. The chick wants to pick some flowers as a present for her mother. As she is singing and walking on the grass, she sees a river. The beautiful flowers are on the other side of the river. She can't swim. She is afraid of the water and there isn't a bridge. She shouts,"Help! Help! Who can help me cross the river?"Just then, a duck comes. He asks the chick,"What's the matter?" The chick says,"I want to cross the river, but I can't swim." The duck says,"Don't be afraid. I will help you!" At last the chick stands on the duck's back and they cross the river together. Reaching(到达) the other side of the river, the chick says,"You're very kind to me. Thank you very much!" The duck says,"Not at all. I have to go now. Good luck. Bye!"
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