湖南怀化市:满分范文

　　满分文(一)

　　Dear Miss Gao,

　　Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You’ve taken good care of my studies since I came to this school. When I’m in trouble, you always encourage me and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With your help, I’ve made great progress in English. I’m so thankful for your love that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours

　　Zhang Hua

　　点评：作者巧妙地把所有的提示词融入到文章中，完整得叙述了对老师的感激之情以及感激老师的理由。本文衔接自然流畅，前后连贯，层层推进。本文最大的特点是作者使用了很多复合句， 状语从句，可见作者对初中阶段的句型掌握地还是很扎实的。

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