沈阳市:满分范文

　　满分文(一)

　　The school was built three years ago. Before that hundreds of children couldn’t go to school

　　because they were very poor. Later the local government was offered over two million yuan by people for “Hope Project”. Thus the school came into being.

　　Now there are sixty teachers and nine hundred pupils in this school. You can see the bright

　　teaching-building with eighteen classrooms, a computer room, a sound lab and a library. In front

　　of the building pupils can play on the playground with a size of 1,200 square meters

　　The school has been well-known in the nearby area. The students there study very hard

　　because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.

　　点评：同样，这是另外一篇根据提示信息完成的文章，作者使用了非常准确地语言把提示信息简洁明了地表达出来。本文表达通顺流畅，基本无语法错误，作者能够准确地翻译提示信息中的一些专有词汇，如computer room, sound lab, 可见作者平时还是有一定的积累量。

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