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　　The Proper Way(s) for students to Relax

　　I am the monitor of Class 3, Grade 3, No. 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.

　　There are 60 students in my class (31 boys and 29 girls).Different students have different ways to relax. Half of the students often watch TV. 12 students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax.

　　As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax. I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides, it can help improve our health. Therefore, I often play pingpang.

　　点评：第一段和第二段是叙述表格中的信息，第三段是表达自己的观点。在叙述信息时，作者使用了简洁地语言把意思准确地传达出来；在抒发自己的观点时候，作者详细地阐明了自己的观点。详略得当，衔接自然，结构紧凑，不愧为一篇佳作。

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