I have a happy family.My family has five people.Look,this is my family photo.

　　The man is my father.He has short black hair and big eyes.My father is thin.He loves our family and loves me very much.I like my father very much!

　　The woman is my mother.My mother is kind and very beautiful.She's thin and tall.She loves us very much! I love my mother forever!

　　Look,the boy is my brother.He's funny !He likes sports and painting. The girl is my sister.She's happy!She likes music.

　　I love my family forever!I have a very happy family1

　　Dear friends,do you have a happy family?

　　博学先生点评台：陈舒娴同学用简单却又饱含深情的言语向大家介绍了自己的爸爸、妈妈、弟弟和妹妹，表达了自己能生长在这样一个幸福家庭的自豪心情。整篇文章语言流畅、用词准确、没有语法错误，是一篇很成功的文章。陈舒娴同学，加油呀！我们期待你写出更优秀的文章。文章级别：A。

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