Ilove my family. There are four people in my family. My father is an engineer. He is very tall. His height is 1.80 meters. He is 43 years old. He likes art. My mother is a farmer. Her face is round and she is beautiful. She is 41 years old. She likes sports. My brother is a middle school student. He is 16. He is 1.74 meters. He likes P.E.. Oh, I forgot to show myself. I'm a girl. I'm 11. I'm tall. I like music. My mother hopes I will make a contribution(贡献) to the society. I hope it will come true in the future.

　　I'm proud of my family, because my parents always work hard. My brother is a good student. I'm not a bad pupil, either. If you are interested in my family, you are welcome to my house.

　　I love my family.

　　点评中心:本篇文章的小作者独小静同学，以不同的手法描述了她的家庭，其间不仅详细介绍了她的家庭成员的情况及其不同的特点，并且强调自己以她的家庭为自豪和骄傲，从而更加突出了本文的主题--爱家。文章结构鲜明，首尾环环相扣，语句流畅，点评中心一致通过，评选独小静同学为"小小作家"！

　　(文/独小静指导教师：曹玮；英语辅导报小学六年级版03～04学年第31期；版权归英语辅导报社所有，独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育，未经许可，不得以任何形式进行转载。)