小学英语课外辅导:小作家梦工厂My School |
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Hello, friends! Welcome to my school. My school is beautiful and very big. There are many rooms in the school building. My classroom is on the sixth floor. There are sixty-nine students in my class. You can see many desks, chairs, a blackboard, three fans, two windows, four lights and a teacher’s desk. My seat is near the door. The computer room is on the third floor. There are many computers in it. I like playing computer games very much!The canteen(食堂) is on the first floor. We have lunch there. Look! This is the playground. We often play games on it. There are many flowers in the garden, some are red, some are yellow... I have a good time every day in my school. I like my school very much. 博学先生点评台:彭扬扬同学向大家描述了他学校的教室,食堂,微机室以及操场,其中重点描写了自己的班级,主次分明,层次清晰,正确地运用了There be句型和一般现在时时态,是一篇很成功的文章,文章级别:A。 (文/彭扬扬 阮学敏;英语辅导报小学五年级版 03~04学年第39期; 版权归英语辅导报社所有,独家网络合作伙伴新浪教育,未经许可,不得以任何形式进行转载。) |
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