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2011年考研英语冲刺必备:写作高分五步攻略(6)

http://www.sina.com.cn   2010年12月29日 17:57   跨考网[ 微博 ]

  慰问信:

  基本结构:

  Dear…,

  表示同情,

  进行安慰,

  鼓励其努力,

  在此表示同情,并希望其早日复原。

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Ming

  常用句型:

  I just can not tell you how sorry I was to learn of your unhappy experience/injury/accident/divorce。

  I felt very sorry indeed when I was informed of your sickness。

  I wish there were something I could say or do to ease your sense of loss/to soften your grief。

  I know there were no words that can be a comfort to you now。

  I hope that you will soon be completely restored to health/get well again。

  Please don’t hesitate to call on me if there is anything I can do now and always。

  范文解析:

  Dear Li Gang,

  I was really shocked andsaddened to hear of your unhappy experience in the earthquake。

  There is little that anyone can say or do at a time like this to ease your grief, but I would express my deepest sympathy。

  In the next day or so you will receive a little package from me. I hope you like it, and that it will be useful ai your present moment.What’s more, please don’t hesitate to contact me if there is anything else I can do now and always。

  I do hope you will soon get well again and be able to come back to school. Be assured of my availability and eagerness to help in any way I can。

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Ming

  4.2 备忘录/告示类应用文写作(Memorandum/Notice)

  基本结构:

  TO:

  FROM:

  SUBJECT:

  DATE:(month day,year)

  正文

  签名

  模拟题及范文:

  Directions:

  You are an active member of the student newspaper. The newspaper is currently looking for journalists for the summer semester. Write a memo that will appear in the newspaper next week describing the position available。

  Date: August 10,2005

  To: All students

  From: Li Ming

  4.3 摘要写作(Abstract)

  This article focuses on the …。

  This thesis discuss/analyzes…。

  This paper provides an overview of …

  This paper presents up-to-date information on …

  1、简单概括

  2、描写画面内容,两句话描写一幅图。

  3、点明中心:重点又是新起点。

  This is a very interesting and though-provoking picture.1 as is vividly depicted in the picture ,the goal keeper thought he was too small for the gate and was afraid that he could not keep the ball from entering the gate. But what the player, who was ready to shoot, thought about  the goal keeper could not help us thinking the truth of the picture it conveys. In his eyes, the goal keeper was so strong that he had almost covered the whole gate. And little did he have the chance to win.2 obviously, the two players looked at the same thing in a different angle.3 (in different angles)

  简单概括

  描写画面内容,每幅图分开描述,并递进关系。

  点明中心,从不同视角看待同一问题。

  2. 现象简介

  Today , advertisements is mounting numbers are appearing on the TV screen . 1 they are not only shown before and after all kinds of programs ---- news, weather forecasts and quiz shows, etc. ---- but even interrupt dramas and movies ,2 and annoy the viewers.3

  1、概括介绍

  2、细节介绍:怎么个多法儿---是节目前后和中间都有

  3、带来的后果就是激怒观众。

  3.寓意象征

  What a vivid and accrate picture it is when describing the meaning of love in the dark. 1 As is shown in the picture ,the love is just like the light in the picture ,which seems insignificant in the sun ,but it certainly shines brighter in the dark.2 in other words ,the darker the place is ,the more precious the light will be.3 love is somewhat the same. It surely means much moer to the man who is in great difficulty than to the one who is in comforts.4

  简要评价

  对画面的简单描述。(结合love对画面进行分析)

  寓意说明,符合题目要求

  结论:灯光在越微弱的地方越明亮,爱心在越需要的地方越有价值

  Species’extinction in America. Facing the figures, we can only admit that America’s population growth has had undesirable effect on its wildlife and will still pose a formidable threat to its wildlife resources if sufficient care is not given.3

  ※1、总括介绍了图画内容(运用对比,强调后者)

  ※2、特别好的过渡方式:不是描述胜过描述

  ※3、结论:如果不足以重视,结果不堪设想

  4、原因分析

  (As far as I am concerned, there are several reasons accounting for the phenomenon。)1 First and foremost, the reasons for this phenomenon are that TV is the most efficient and rapid way of dissemination(传播)information.2 As China develops its highly competitive market economy, manufacturers and sales people(salespersons)need to inform the general public of the latest commodities that are available.3 Furthermore, TV stations use the money that they earn from showing the advertisements to produce more programs. Last but not least, it is necessary to keep consumers informed of the range of (the)products that they may choose from。(原文的过渡出现在下一段)

  ※1、阐述中心,或者引导本段。

  ※2、例举原因

  ※3、对已经提出原因的拓展

  However, the tobacco consumption is experiencing a decrease, 1 According to the given figures, the tobacco production in 1994 was 14.364 billion pounds while in 1995 it reduced to 14.2 billion pounds. This is mainly because 2 more and more people have become aware of the harm of smoking to human brings.Many of them resist the addiction to tobacco and advise people around not to smoke. Furthermore, governments of many countries realizing the serious effects of tobacco have taken effective measures to call on people to give up smoking. So I believe a healthy tomorrow of less tobacco will be achieved through efforts of every person.3

  ※1、阐述中心

  ※2、列举原因,this 作过渡词

  ※3、如果减少吸烟人群,可能产生的结果(注意命题的积极倾向,展望未来式很合命题者口味)

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