5、利弊分析

　　In the country, on the other hand, one can enjoy the advantages of fresh air and food, and a more relaxed(relaxing)life style. Housing is usually spacious and inexpensive in the country. I and, as for recreation, what could be more relaxing than a stroll down a country lane amid beautiful scenery? 2 However, there are disadvantages of living in either the city or the country.3 City air tends to be polluted, and the streets are always crowded and noisy. In the country, on the other hand, the lack of stimulating activities can make a person feel bored and isolated.4

　　※1、列举乡村居住的优势

　　※2、对优势的拓展说明

　　※3、过渡说明：劣势开始

　　※4、列举无论城乡居住皆有劣势

　　6、举例说明

　　It seems reasonable when people laugh at the cartoon, but it would no longer be laughable when people find similar things taking place in our daily life.1 Recently there is a trend of making promises in various fields of our society. From departments of government to common shopping centers, many businesses who supple products of offer services have made various promises to their customers or service receivers.2 They assert their products to be of good quality or promise to offer excellent service.3 As a matter of fact, many of these businesses claim in the same way that(比较)the hen in the above cartoon promises to lay eggs.4

　　※1、过渡：第一段说到可笑，下面就谈不可笑——连接

　　※2、例子：商场、政府的承诺行为

　　※3、拓展：深化承诺行为的细节

　　※4、结论：同母鸡下蛋的承诺一样虚无没有价值

　　※表示性质，代替adj.=of +n。(小作文高分必杀)

　　e.g. helpful=of any help   assistant=of any assistance   good=of any good   harmful=of any harm

　　The following examples will support this point.1 In schools, a unit-exam not only declares the end of the former unit, but also acts as a reminder of the preview work for the next unit. In the business field, what a CEO needs to do at the end of a year is more than review and summarize (review and summarizing). It is the time to formulate and effective and efficient development plan for next year.2 Just turn back to the sports ground。(句号结束)although in front of the end there isn’t a real start---arrowhead, there surely exists an invisible one sprouting(appearing)in every athlete’s mind, blooming(being)the training strategy of the preparation for next competition.3

　　※1、承上启下

　　※2、举例论证

　　※3、举例的同时说明结论：终点又是新起点，正是这种心态成为下次比赛成功的技巧或策略。

　　7、判断评论

　　It is clear that promise is what you claim you can do or you will do, not what you really are or you are expected to be.1 Generally speaking, it is good and sometimes necessary to make commitment to people, but promising what you must or should do can be considered a kind of cheating.2 What the cartoon really aims at is not the funny picture itself but to criticize this popular phenomenon existing in our society.3

　　※1、既点名了本段主题：谈承诺，又是一个定义，起承上启下作用。

　　※2、自己的建议。

　　※3、再次强调“承诺”这一社会现象。

　　8、问题建议

　　Child education has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by educational experts, but also by people in all walks(职业、行业) of life.1 The failure of child education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to the children themselves. Thus, it’s high time that parents, educators and the government made concerted(共同努力的，同心协力的，conert得来)efforts to put an end to this situation.2(家长，老师和政府应该怎么做)

　　※1、引出本段主题，儿童教育的现状，用婉转的方式表达。

　　※2、本段结论：三方行动

　　In our life, what we need most is self-insurance and a proper view of challenges before us. 1 Therefore, we should bear in mind that our competitors may not be as terrible(frightening)as expected, and our painstaking efforts will pay off as long as we arm ourselves with courage and confidence.2 Only in this way can we overcome any difficulties and challenges.3

　　※1、从自己角度提出意见

　　※2、具体行动的方法

　　※3、only 表示强调，以及建议的价值。

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