9、个人选择

　　All in all, I would say that living in the city is best(better)，1 for the convenience the city offers in terms of education and work(job opportunities)；2 after all, one can always spend vacations in the country---and get the best of both.3

　　※1、选择结果

　　※2、选择原因

　　※3、总结

　　As for me, I have always led a regular life.1 By everyday exercises, I build up a strong body,2 and by reading intensively I learn to acquire a proper attitude toward life.3

　　※1、个人选择或实践

　　※2、选择带来的好的后果

　　※3、拓展

　　10、现实运用

　　As we all know, children are the future of our country, Their healthy growth has therefore become a serious concern among many people.1 It should be made clear that too much care is not love. The real love and care for them are to prepare them for the future. When faced with difficulties, they can summon up the courage and exert their strength to overcome the difficulties. When faced with fierce competition, they can employ their knowledge, skills and experience to confront with their rival.2 This is the younger generation we can expect.3

　　※1、价值体现：孩子关乎祖国的未来。

　　※2、启示：重要的原因

　　※3、寄予希望

　　2007年范文写作

　　首段：图画描述：

　　This is a series of interesting and thought-provoking pictures. A goalkeeper, who is trying hard to keep the ball from the goal, sees himself as a dwarf. What’s funnier is that the football-player, preparing to kick the ball, regards the goalkeeper as huge as the goal. The meaning conveyed by the picture is clear but profound. Both of them lack courage and confidence in front of challenges。

　　中间段：寓意象征+举例说明

　　The majority of people would agree that everyone may feel challenged when a powerful rival appears in his/her mind. What divides them into successes and losers is their attitude towards confidence。(We can easily find the equivalent of the topic discussed here in our surroundings。)We, undergraduates girding ourselves for the NETEM(the Examination for postgraduate candidates)，provide a good illustration. Some of us feel depressed when thinking that they are not able to prepare well, so they even give up the chance of participating in the examination. In fact, the exam is not as difficult as they suppose, and a little more courage and confidence will motivate them to achieve the final successs。

　　尾段：建议+展望

　　Accordingly, it is the time that we placed great emphasis on building up our confidence. What we should bear in mind is that no one can overcome difficulties without confidence。(In other words,  We should be honest about the challenges we face。) only in this wa we can se a right goal. challenge it ,and achieve it。

　　Tips:

　　1.稳重下体的部分是精彩的语言，即文章的高分点，希望同学们学习。

　　2.文中有下划线的部分是范文的错误，希望大家思考，然后改正，避免自己在写作时犯这样的错误。

　　3.再次强调，希望大家不要背范文，学习精彩的句式表达，背会，通过多练习掌握这些句型。

　　小作文范文及解析

　　2007年Part A  真题及解析(投诉信&建议信)：

　　Directions:

　　Write a letter to your university library ,making suggestions for improveing its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter. Ues “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address。

　　To Whom It May Concern,

　　I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend ma spare time. Generally speaking ,the services you offer here are quite good; however ,I have some suggestions for you to adopt. And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration。

　　To begin with ,will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having classes, so they can’t come to the library. Moreover ,some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines ,we will be very pleased。

　　I really wish to have a more comfortable library. Thank you for your time and consideration。

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　2008 Part A 真题及解析(致歉信)：

　　Directions:

　　You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob ,your landlord there. Write him a letter to

　　make an apology, and

　　suggest a solution。

　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter. Ues “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address。

　　解析

　　Dear Bob,

　　I am writing to express my apology to you。

　　Several days ago，I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house. Unfortunately，after I came back from Canada，I found it in my luggage. Was in such an hurry that I forgot to return it to you .I will send it to you by post of expose as soon as possible. If necessary，I will compensate for any troubles it may cause。

　　Once again，I feel so sorry for any  inconvenrence  caused. Please accept my apologies。

　　Sincerely yours，

　　Li Ming

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